| Reviews for Adam and Eve |
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   evolution-500 chapter 46 . 7/24 Just finished this. Wow, what a journey and a conclusion! I got a huge kick out of seeing Jack and the reference to the good ending. All in all, this has been a great story and I was loving every moment of it. Any chance of this continuing, or is this the end for Davian and Amelia's story? I'm glad I read this. |
| evolution-500 chapter 40 . 7/24 A very satisfying end to Ares. Nicely done. |
| evolution-500 chapter 35 . 7/24 Really cool nods to the first Bioshock game, especially with the mentioning of Jack's past actions. |
| evolution-500 chapter 34 . 7/24 Jesus, real nightmare fuel you have here. |
| evolution-500 chapter 29 . 7/24 Oh shit! Sander Cohen's still alive?! |
| evolution-500 chapter 27 . 7/24 Really emotional chapter. I was tearing up reading this. |
| evolution-500 chapter 17 . 7/24 LOL I gotta say, Archer's a really fun character. XD |
| evolution-500 chapter 15 . 7/24 Jeez, what a kick in the groin! I knew that Davian probably had a history, but man, I was NOT expecting that! Not only a former member of the Saturnine, but the fact he also left his own sister with them? THAT is cold. A couple errors, more specifically in Hawthorne's dialogue; it should be "they're" as opposed to "their", as the latter is possessive. |
| evolution-500 chapter 14 . 7/24 Really good so far, although the transition from Tannenbaum to Epsilon could have been made a bit clearer with a horizontal line. Really enjoying this! |
| evolution-500 chapter 10 . 7/23 Really good stuff, although one error here ("Their after me Cain!"). I love how even though they settled their differences, there's still that tension between Epsilon and Davian. |
| evolution-500 chapter 7 . 7/23 I am absolutely loving this so far. What an odd yet compelling dynamic you have going on here! Epsilon's point of view has me somewhat curious - does this mean that the bad ending for "Bioshock 2" was canon, or is this merely Epsilon's somewhat warped point of view? Really wonderful work so far. |
| evolution-500 chapter 1 . 6/15 Wow, what a terrific start! I think you just nailed the tone and atmosphere of the game perfectly while giving the splicers and Big Sister their own little characterizations. Really enjoying this so far. Keep it up! :) |
| notYacob chapter 26 . 5/19 Davian's inner voice/alternate personality reminded me of the different masks in Hotline Miami talking to Jacket, and now whenever I see it that music plays in my head. Great story so far, I wish I had found this sooner. |
| YungTurd chapter 1 . 3/27 Definitely a must read for anyone on here. Great story wow |
| Valiryo chapter 17 . 3/22 Already hoping this Archer guy dies a painful death.. |
