I read both chapters moving in the right direction. Swizzle definitely handled all that. Oh Rancis you didn't need to freak out that badly. Vanellope has love you even during Turbo's deception. Hey Hershel seriously you overpriced on the snacks. There I can't blame Rancis it is outrageous.

Cute story! I love this pair!

that was super adorable and every time i read this it gives me chills

Very cute and funny. I have to ask would Swizz really have shaved Rancis's hair off if he did not ask Vanellope out?

Woah rancis is freakin out to much! I mean come on, its his...o yeah.. He's 9. But good job! And you better have that chapter of fear of the dark decent OR ILL GET THAT PUMPKIN MAN TO KILL YOU! (Also do you notice the new fanfiction upgrade?)

I really enjoyed this, good job

lmao I wasn't expecting Rancis to freak out so much XD but given that he's 9 in this, I suppose that's what any 9 year old boy would do in that situation. Anyway, this was cute :)

d'aww that was cute and fluffy, Vanellope taking care of him. And LOL at Swizzle threatening to shave his head and then literally kicking him out.

Love it.

Make more chapters

(Not logged on,yeah im lazy) Great story. I like how swizzle threatend to shave his hair off _ but if rancis could choose between keeping his hair or never dating van what would You think he would pick?
Skittela: Well duh!, he would pick-
Me: HUSHH! This is not for you :/
Anyway great chapter! See ya soon!
Skittela: Hasta, la vista

Aww that was so cute _

What will be his reaction stay tuned bwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Great story