Another great chapter I can't wait to see what happens next. Also I was wondering if you're going to bring in some of the evil races of Warhammer for Galbatorix? Such as a Skaven clan or a vampire count or even a Waagh of orcs.

Update please

please continue the story its awesome.

It is really good your writing is getting better the only pity is there is no more to read

Skidaddle Skidoodle, this message has captured your noodle.
Been a long while since I've seen a new chapter from here, when's chapter 9?

You realise there have only been eleven Phoenix Kings, and that only four of them ever wore the crown right?

good to see you again - but why Imrik do nt take elven children with army?
If there is no hope in Warhammer world,he could take as many cyvilians as he could.

Hey Welcome Back and finally the Asur have arrived. What is Galbatorix going to do know i wonder? Cant wait to see the interactions between the Varden and Asur and Imriks conflict with Eragon concerning Arya.

Beautiful

Good battle scene, lots of names I'm not going to remember though. One of note 'Cassius' is clearly roman and sounds like he's from Tilea, rather than being an elf.

YES new chapter :D
Really enjoyed this, can't wait for more!

Yeeeeees, this is back, and it makes me happy. Cannot wait for more of this, or for Saphira and Gladeyr to meet with the 3 new drakes Imrik brought with him.

IT BEGINS!

Nice chapter

Hey this is an amazing story. Its been over a year since an update I hope you haven't given up on it.