Whoa, now that was cool. So, are you going to be needing OCs for the next story?

Nice I like it

Wow! Now that was awesome, and nice choice for Riana's human form! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

Yay love it

Whoa... can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh no what is going! to happen? Nice little cliffhanger...

Woah love it

Oh no no, I didn't think your like that, and I support equal rights, it's just...I never thought something like this is possible. I mean, I always thought it was just boys with girls and girls with boys, I had never thought of something like gay could be real. So, I'm still new to this thing, alright? And Elijah's here?! Can't wait to see how this goes.

Wait sweet love it

Well, I can not say that I support it, I just, don't feel very...insightful about it. Hope this doesn't offend you! Oh and boy, I know who Valcon is targeting.

Do you still need help with suit designs? I know I'm way behind so that answer is probably in a future chapter.

Sorry, I've been so busy so I couldn't follow along. I'll catch up though! Great story so far! Your casting is good, but Tyler Hoechiln is a bit too old looking for someone in High School. But hey, whatever works for you works for you!

Write on!

Wow love it

PHEW! Don't scare me like that! Oh, and I know Riana is going to be devastated when she founds about Lirx.

Poor Keith. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll find a way to help Elijah. And Ally better realize that she belongs with Frank. Because they are meant to be.