It can't be unfinished! It's rare to find fanfics that have their longing slowly grow (rather than a sudden realization and then bam, fucking ensues). The slowly growing feelings was perfect and I believe you truly have a talent! If you one day decide to finish this, I would be delighted! It's rare to find stories like this one.

I loved this Chapter! Can't wait to see what happens in detention! Update soon please...

its been like forever since i reviewed...but oh well, this chapter was pure mean for poor severus. i liked how bold harry was...'innocent' too! ( insert evil laugh )
this chapter was really something! i loved it! :D
hope to read more of the sexual tension between the two...oh and i cant wait to see what happens at harry's next occlumency lesson !

cant wait for detention. :3

Ah, playing with fire is going to get you burned... both of them are about to learn that. Harry suddenly turned bold, Severus turned uncertain, and now they are dancing closer and closer to each other.

So, Voldemort is waiting patiently on Severus to get his Harry closer before acting out, eh? I don't know if that is good for Severus or not. We shall see.

Thanks for the lovely chapter.

*_*. Great chapter!

I love this fanfiction! :D

Awesome update!

Take what you can get Harry, I am sure Severus is doing the same.

Welcome back, IYH. It is great news that you came in with. I am thrilled about the job offers and the apartment, even if that means you've been away for a while.

This was a lovely addition to the story, and I do hope that they will find this dance funny when they look back on it.

i just started reading your story and i quite like it! im not exactly a huge fan of slash but i really like the way you are progressing with your story.
i was wondering though, when do you plan on making the final battle happen? and what about voldemort's horcruxes? you haven't mentioned anything about that...
it is really wonderful to read your story and i think i am quite liking how bothered harry is in snape's presence! please keep on writing! :D

Poor Harry, is having such a rotten morning. Severus wouldn't be doing so good if he knew the thoughts running through Harry's brain all morning. I'm glad you are back!

uhm, why is this not 80 chapters long so I can keep reading it T_T
I need more!

poor sevrs, being a total idiot, yeas being mean and a git, will solve everthing haha

kkkkkk
good chapter

Oh, poor Harry. He is going to have to deal with Severus' ire and attempt to make himself feel better. Thank you for rounding out the edges and filling in the bits of the storyline. The meeting between the trio and Ginny, being kicked out, all of it was needed to make this story that much more.

Nicely done so far. I do like how Severus is working really hard to keep his lines distinct. I think Albus won't mind if he crossed them though. Harry is a bit uncertain, I would think. Give them a bit, they'll be fine.