interestingly simple concept good understanding of the charcters motivations to short but thats just my view all in all a well put together piece of fanfiction one questuion who is Brian?. Your story held my interested which is not any easy thing to do particularly at the moment this shows that you have real talent in my view anyway.

This was a really great story! Usually I am not into hameron, but this is amazing! Great job!

I which this wasn't just a one shot

Hameron love! Great one-shot.

Sweet and sad.