| Reviews for Removing Dudley From The Equation - Year 3 |
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   old-crow chapter 7 . 11/18/2019 Hi, I realize that you completed these stories years ago. In third year, you seem to be lacking subject matter. Objectively much is happening in Potterverse, but so far, almost all of your tale has been told from Harry's PoV. There are loads of other opportunities such as, What are the Goblins doing, preparations for the Quidditch cup, TWT, activity from any of the "Imperiused DEs" or the like. You would have had a much stronger tale had some of these threads been used. cheers Old-Crow |
| Corwyn chapter 8 . 8/22/2019 Thanks for sharing this with us. |
| tricorvus chapter 8 . 11/23/2018 Um, England can’t win a game they won’t be—- oh you’re changing things Rock on Such |
| tricorvus chapter 6 . 11/23/2018 I recognize Snitchnip from Quidditch Through the Ages. Great chapter. Yes Sirius is irrepressible enough to enjoy Such for the rest of his life. |
| tricorvus chapter 5 . 11/23/2018 I have used that and so has my irrepressible ex. SUCH! Thank you and rock on |
| tricorvus chapter 1 . 11/23/2018 If she doesn’t quit calling him a runt, imma hurt a mustachioed beotch. Lol Great chapter rock on |
| Arabella Lee Smith chapter 8 . 12/30/2015 Poor Sirius is having a bad time adjusting to the adult world. Thank you for sharing your might-have-been world with us. |
| Arabella Lee Smith chapter 2 . 12/30/2015 Interesting twist! Just when she and Harry were getting along so nicely, because Ripper like Harry. I wonder if we will see more of Marge. |
| davycrockett100 chapter 8 . 10/12/2015 awesome job |
| GuesssWho chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 Sometimes I want to hit Sirius. Bullying isn't actually funny. . . . I liked 'Professor Such,' though. |
| Diddleymaz chapter 8 . 9/1/2014 Good |
| noreenklose chapter 8 . 7/23/2014 Sorry you seemed to run out of steam on this year. I hope you continue with the TriWizard Tournament for your next story. Looking forward to the start of the next year! I hope Sirius gets back at Snape. Perhaps, he could collect letters from all the other 3 Houses that Snape picks on…get the kids to start a campaign with their parents to force Snape out of Hogwarts because he is a Death Eater. After all, Lupin had to leave because the parents didn’t want their children near a Werewolf. Maybe the parents don’t want their kids near a Death Eater, either. KUTGW, Noreen |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/8/2014 Awesome story! I hope year four will be up soon! And isn't kind of funny that more rules for a game that doesn't exist are being made? |
| D.J. Scales chapter 8 . 3/2/2014 Wow shocking yet interesting |
| creativesm75 chapter 8 . 2/25/2014 cool |
