IVE READ THIS SEVERAL TIMES AND I LOVE IT EACH TIME.

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I ABSOLUTLY LOVED THIN STORY YOU SHOULD HAVE IT PUBLISHED IT IS LIKE IT WAS A PART OF THE SERIES IT WAS AS IF THE SERIES CONTINUED TO THIS POINT! I LOVE IT!

Love this story!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Cool this is a great story and I love it. You did an excellent work on this. :D

Great story, I really enjoyed this.

I haven't fully read this yet but I saved it for later. Anyways, I noticed you misspelled some Japanese words.

*Hanyou not hanyo
*Youkai not yokai
*Kikyou not Kikiyo

You haven't updated for almost a year now. I feel sad when authors abandon or put their beautiful works on hiatus. So, I hope you find the time to update again. I'll wait for it. Keep it up.

Apples and strawberries,

E xx

OMG. This was so wonderful, I am so very impressed! Your good grammar is a very nice treat& all the detail is wonderful. &then i got to the end and saw there was more & now i am even happier. Thank you for the amazing read
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I think I teared up a little reading this. It was beautiful! (If only it happened in the show...)

2 WORDS... LOVE IT

I can't believe that this story does not have more reviews! I loved your story: it was beautifully constructed - you were true to the characters all along, the love scene was erotic yet romantic (thank you for not making it tasteless!), the storyline moved forward harmoniously, and the happy-ending truly was one of the better and thoroughly well-written ones I have read in a long time. And thank God for writers who know about correct grammar and sentence construction ;-)

actually the tokijin is the sword wielded by Sesshomaru and creates the Dragon Strike.

This is seriously one of the best "happily ever after" ending/continuances that I've read in a long time. So glad to have finally gotten the chance to read it! You've done a wonderful job with all the chapters. Can't wait to see what you've come up with next!

oh this is a great story, i cant wait to read the next and last chapter.