Great, a Gary Stu OC.

This is GREAT! The grammar is fantastic, all the characters carry the feel of the actual show, and the humor... Ive had to cover my mouth to avoid laughing quite a few times! (my family is asleep.) well done! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Really she has no idea who the stranger is!?
Someone wearing black with a skull mask and has a black scythe and pocketed a what was a misty image of the object and can’t put it together. If gods exist then DEATH would as well.

WAIT WHAT?!

lol why ruby wolf fluffy fat cat better hahahahahhaah

You're story is making me hate Yang and Definitely Weiss. Ruby and Weiss make a bad couple, I like Blake x Faunus! Ruby Because it's interesting.

Weiss is a bad ass first the god of dreams now the god of war she is like fucking kratos lol awesome story man

Sigh... it was such a good story. Interesting plot, interesting characters then all this bs happens. No character development, ruby became total mary sue, drama nonexistent, reactions to previous events bad, blake and yang does not feel necessary and most of all, too. Much. Ocs. You might as well make another story cause this does not feel like a fanfiction. It's just fiction at this point. Everyone is out of character and you forgot to place yourself in the character's shoes. I am not dissing your story and i think you write well but i feel like at this point, you've become lazy or hit with major writer's block. Your grammar is nice but it's not as descriptive. It just feels like a long anime like Naruto or One piece and it just lacks the RWBY feel. Sorry it's such a long review but this is what i feel about your story and i'm just giving up on it because of this. Albeit some of your ocs are nice like orion and i like your concept, it really has just drifted away from the original series

Well shit, I hit the wrong button. As i was saying; that was by far the best novel I've read in my entire existence. You will know what this means, you have earned the right to my number one on a very prestigious list, congratulations Dagger of Faith/Cynthia.

That, Dagger of Faith, now that I've finished, even with it's almost unrealistic ending, was by far the best book I have read in my life, ending included. I absolutely loved tye entire

Well done you made me cry

that ending was purr-fect :D always knew blake could be over protective of her friends :D hope she gave cardin a good whalloping like he deserves. I didn't know those wasps were FATAL. just painful which means they technically attempted murder. bastards need a beating.

doesn't a person from the series use sound as a weapon?

I've only read the first few paragraphs and I now have a few question. A: Is this suppose to be like your own version of Team RWBY or did you not have enough information on where they were from at the time of quoting this? B: If Weiss is also from Atlas, then shouldn't she know about Christmas as well. And C: Am I gonna see some weird shit going on in this story.

Sorry if this sounds like I'm being mean, it's just that I like to double check or even triple check information that might make people upset. But seeing as this was made in 2013, I'd imagine there wasn't a lot of information to go on at the time.

Really, Blake's soul is clean? This chapter was pretty ridiculous all around really.