I'm a sentence is and Dying! David! HAHAHHAHA Omg I cannot breath. HAHAHHAHA

poor Eleven I don't think Rose would dismiss him like that though maybe she talks to him later

Woo

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.
I was so bloody disappointed the billie wasn't Rose, she was just hte Bad Wolf and this makes life better and Eleven! He wants her.
I'm going to hug you okay? *hug*
Thank you.

:(
Much better! The 50th needed much fixing.

The eleven at the end was just beautiful. I'm crying over here! :(

Gah, it hurts. Oh god, does it hurt. You just had to add the bit with Eleven being all heartbroken and wanting to be with her, you just HAD to do it. This story is brilliant though, even if it does hurt my Drose feels terribly.
D

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH
FEELS

You should write one for 11 & Rose.

Not just how he feels... But... Maybe a continuation of this or something where he has *his* moment with her.

Oh that was happy and sad at the same time. I feel so bad for the time lord Ten and Eleven. She should just stay.

Thank you, I was needing this T.T

A beautiful mix of angst and fluff.
/applauds/

"Yeah, me too. I wish you could meet Donna. Oh you'd love her!"
"Is she your current companion?"
"Yeah, she's brilliant she is."

Um, there's not really anyway this could make sense.

If this 10 knows who David is, knows WHAT David is, a biological metacrisis produced through Donna... then he's from AFTER Journey's End which means Donna isn't his companion, she's back in Chiswick with no memory of him. Furthermore he'd know that Rose knows about Donna - given the events of Journey's End.

You could have Rose asking about Donna and having 10 explain what happened, but like I said, Rose can't not know who Donna is in this continuity, nor would there be any reason for the Doctor to not know so that she'd have to pretend ignorance for timeline preservation.

That said, I'm interested in seeing what you have cooked up here. Why did The Moment open a portal to 'Pete's World'? Maybe so the War Doctor could see who Rose Tyler, the avatar that The Moment chose, was and what she meant to his future selves, what part she played in them becoming who they are? Mind you at some point you'll need to have something from the War Doctor's point of view, he must have recognised her as the person who The Moment selected for its appearance to him, even though you didn't have him react openly.

The only issues is that 10 was post Journey's End. Actually right before EoT, so Donna wasn't still hia companion.

I agree I wish she was in it more. I loved the show though it was great. I just wish all The Doctors could interact with her.