Having read many of the ME/Halo crossovers on this site I can say hands down this one is off to the best start of them all. Thank you for the time and effort put into this story

There was an issue with that caused it to break and replace fem shep with grieson and mshep with just Shepard

Really enjoying this, this chapter was amazing, really can't wait for the next!

interesting story... although i just have ONE complaint... 30 chapters in, and you have yet to mention Jien Garson, which is the three listed characters of your story.

It's gonna be rather depressing to read about cortana getting corrupted and turning against the MC the 343 did in H5 I that is the route you are taking this.

.Good.

Ik review! Less go!

Sheesh Cortana
You can't even hear Johns voice?

Don't really care for Kai Lang he's essentially useless to the story... Just seems like padding to make more suspense so the chief doesn't get to Cortana quickly.

You this turing Cortana thing the story is just going fail from there like halo 5's story did and you just disregarding physics with me shields vs halo weapon. Halo weapon would a good amount of damage to the shields per shot of the gun cause of the mass of the bullet and it's supersonic speed but the main factor for chief and the other Spartans to change to me weapons because of ammunition for the halo weapons.

Fucking Awesome!
Thats all I can say. Thanks for the extremely quick update. Love you!

Ah man. I’m excited for what comes next!

Another good chapter. Looking forward to more.

Heh! Well that escalated quickly. I wonder if Cortana will succeed and push through Version's manipulation and prevail. It's seems like Cortana is being infected by the logic plague in a similar manner to how the Gravemind did so to Mendicant Bias and Cortana herself before. Is also seems Chief and Co. are screwed now that the Reaper Destroyer has resumed movement and is heading right for them. I wonder if Legion will be able to make a difference and if the Geth fleet will reach some weapon solutions from orbit to surface soon enough before the mission if FUBAR. Can't wait for more next time.

Cheerio!

really cool chapter and personally, I'm actually hoping cortana goes Reaper, it's a unique plot angle that no one on FF, to my knowledge, has even attempted. I really like how you showed in a kinda meta way how a virus infects a computer, it played to Cortana's ego, told her what she wanted to hear and offered her what she wanted. I think it would be a cool plotline to see explored with Cortana aiding the Reapers, and Cheif having to deal with actually having to fight her.
P.S. just an FWI, since FF did something and decided to merge F & M Shepards into just Shepard, all stories before that had the character defaulted to J. Garson for some reason and your's has that in the tags. Just letting you know so you can correct it.