Dude,you have stopped updating for 3 years. If you need help with the story,i can help you with it,but dont just lay the story around as if it is nothing. Have a nice day.

Not a bad start for a story. As a sugestion,have The Doctor make Mels wear a curly wig and call hersealf River Song. Also,as a sugestion,have Mels try to kill The Doctor,but fail,so have her low blow him and leave to kill Hitler. Also as a sugestion,have the Doctor make Mels save Amy and Rory with The Tardis. Hope you think of using my sugestions,make sure you update soon enough and have a nice day.

are u continuing this? Please update this as fast as you can.

Omg, I'm so glad that my story has inspired you to write something of your own. Keep up the good work xx

PLEASE!PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE!
From: Your Loving Sister, 2000ArtisticMMKitties:P
Btw love the story! I'll correct any spelling mistakes later k?