Awesomeness

enjoyable and I would actually like to see harry and his family somehow end up in the highschool DxD world

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

such a good story... I'm so glad that Priscilla and Lily, even though they were monsters, deserved a much better ending than the canon, and that ending is great, I also enjoyed seeing how the story went without having to weaken the protagonists, or make them make stupid decisions for the good of the plot, this Harry was a very satisfying protagonist. I wanted to see more of him making Priscilla and Lily happy, but I accept that the story is here and I will be pleased with my imagination.
It also makes me happy that Harry has no self-esteem issues, today's fanfics insist on making the protagonist a poor guy who thinks he does not deserve love because he is a monster and should isolate himself, which is so boring and stupid that I understand the idea, but some writers make it extremely disgusting to me.
Thanks to the author of the story, I will save it and hope to remember it for the rest of my ignorant life. By the way, I read some of your other stories, [Koneko / Harry] and a fic jaune, were great too, but this is your best work, it's my favorite and [Harry / Priscilla] is the best couple.

Now this is more like it.

Excellent !

I have one complaint about this story and that is how random family became important to him. One minute he's desiring to become a monster and has super cold and analyzing eyes and the next all that matters is family. I know you can't do much in the timeframe of a one-shot but you had 11k words to put in at least a little effort in developing this. As it stands it feels like a token attempt to give your story some meaning when all it would've taken to salvage the situation was one or two sentences of his inner thoughts.

Please make more fanfics just like this one!
It was entertaining.

Albus wanted to make a weapon of Harry, well...he got it!

Overly dramatic in some parts, but still a fun read. 7.5/10.

I enjoyed it. I think I wouldn't have minded a long version of the same story, just fleshed out a little, maybe into 4 or 5 chapters. Overall, a very successful crossover.

Nice I rather like the family that Harry made form himself.

You know, there's so few Claymore stories out there with a good story. Decent plot. Or good grammer.

I would love to see another Claymore/Harry Potter one shot crossover from you.

If you want to discuss some one shot ideas, then send a PM my way. I do have a few in mind.

I am curious about what happened to the Potter and Black children, along with a few other details. either way thanks for the oneshot

nice