where is the next chapter of this story please

I cant wait to see if you'll ever come back to this. it's alright if you're scared, or dont have much inspiration. Sometimes the best thing to do is to just start writing. And then come back to it later. Give yourself some time to really think about it. Then your ideas'll start flowin'!

shame this was abandoned hopefully it will be picked up again someday one of the few sao fanfics i enjoyed and the concepts involved have so much potential for worldbuilding and divergence from cannon its impressive

Reality marble? Like in Fate/stay night?
I suppose it's pretty similar

One option for the next heritic god would be some kinda fey god with the asshole keeping Asuna, like you could use Herne, the horned god, God of the Wild Hunt

Oh good you gave him an actual reason for doing this instead of the BS "I forgot"
At least you have surpassed the (in this case low) bar that is canon
Keep up the good work

Very interesting concept and I like the premise that kiaba is Morpheus, though I'm a little annoyed that you didn't take the opportunity to fix some of the most glaringly bad dialogue in anime (well... in popular anime anyway, some of the less popular anime there's some really cringe stuff)
Calling watching someone else play video games the most boring thing ever is so untrue that not just one but two entire professions can be made out of letting people watch you play video games
At least you made the "moved too fast" part seem a bit more believable with actually explaining that he moved faster than the game could animate given how crazy realistic the world is, that makes it an actual point of evidence, so that's cool, pretty shaky evidence by comparison to how the something witty entertainment crew did to SAO abridged but more than the show gave, so kudos there
I'm curious to whether the abilities Morpheus will grant will have more to do with the avatar in the game he made or his actual god powers
Dreams, prophesy and shapeshifting or game design, holy sword and perfect defense
I also like how your black swordsman strategizes and thinks instead of just relying on his Uber reflexes (while important to gaming reflexes aren't nearly as important as system knowledge and strategy in real world games, knowing what your enemy is going to do and acting on that knowledge is way more effective than reacting to what you see them do).

This is honestly, a very well put together and well thought out story. Good Job!everything flows freely and feels as if it would be a part of the world your crafting.

I really, REALLY enjoy this. please write more!

man this is great based on the pic im assuming that he will be able to use his sao stuff in the real world right oh well don't tell ill be more interested to read it

interesting.

Please do not stop working on this.

pretty good, also VERY dead.

This is sooo good! Kirito as a campione, this is the only fanfic with that central theme to it that I could find. So please update this, I really hope it's not dead. Anyways, keep up the great work!

Wow, this is one of the best fights scenes I've ever read!
Cool idea, I haven't seen Campione yet but the way you write it seems interesting!

Basically this got dropped or forgotten but i still want to wait if there is a update

Do you mean jelly filled doughnuts?