Reviews for Star Crossed |
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dhannah1988 chapter 16 . 9/29/2017 So I had this urge to read Hans x Elsa fanfics again because I love this pairing. I can't believe that I never read this story before. This was absolutely amazing! I love the that Hans and Elsa met at the coronation and the secret affair they have. I think you did a great job incorporating the movie plot to this story. |
miryamjj chapter 16 . 4/4/2017 I just found this wonderful fic and absolutely loved it! It was beautiful! Interesting how you made them meet and let Elsa succumb to the temptation of having a drink...and more. The whole original beginning and later your adaptation of the movie to fit it in your story. I laughed, I cried with their suffering and breathe very relieved when they saved each other. Plus I loved and enjoyed your steamy ending. It was just great! You have talent |
Markus Ramikin chapter 2 . 9/16/2016 "Nothing in his demeanor suggested attraction to any part of her body but her brain…and perhaps her heart." Because it's such a horrible thing when people are additionally attracted to a charming face, or a nice figure, or a lovely voice, or someone's poise and the way they carry themselves. That's why all Disney princesses were average-looking at best. Oh, wait... |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/19/2015 I loved your story! I liked the plot very much. The hidden romance between Hans and Elsa and all the trouble and secrets they tried to keep from Anna and people was amazing. The way you made the events of the story fit in your plot was wonderful and brilliant. The last chapter was hot! So a happy ending for everyone! Thank you for sharing this great fanfic with us! |
JustitiaMyriam chapter 16 . 12/18/2014 This is a really amazing story! I love your writing! Great job! I had a hard time keeping back my tears. And I can't find anything I don't like about your story! I love it! |
Miss Anly chapter 16 . 10/22/2014 Lovely story! I think that Elsa and Hans make a very striking couple. Both of them are conflicted individuals with hard childhood. I like the chemistry between them and you really made Hans into adorable sweetheart. Thank you so much for sharing this heartwarming story! |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/7/2014 This story can't be described by any word other than, "Perfect!" It made my day, oh how CUTE AND WELL-WRITTEN IT WAS! YOU HAVE A GIFT FOR WRITING AND CREATIVITY. This was absolutely enchanting and I can't wait to see what other things you come up with in the future. |
selena chapter 16 . 7/13/2014 Omg I cried on some parts but that was a fucking awesome story! |
MySoapBox chapter 15 . 5/21/2014 I enjoyed this story very much. By far the best Hans/Elsa I've read hear. I thought you wrote the characters with real emotion and reactions and captured a taste of what it feels like to love someone and be loved in return. Thanks! |
pamela.aguirre.5832 chapter 16 . 5/16/2014 Oh God I love this fanfiction it's so awesome please post more its just so good |
The Pianist's Touch chapter 16 . 5/11/2014 This was amazing |
Genesis Chi chapter 16 . 5/11/2014 I cannot think of the words to describe the awesomeness of this story, this is exactly what I wanted when I set out looking for Hansla stuff, every chapter I wanted to go to the next as soon as possible because I was so excited, I made myself read at night so I forced myself to go to bed as an excuse to pace myself. I'd love more of this story, but I'm also very happy where you've left off. In short, you're brilliant, and I'm keeping my eye on you! :D |
Guest chapter 16 . 5/6/2014 Magnificent! Wonderful fanfiction! Best I've read yet! You should be proud of such an amazing story. I know I loved it! frost_Line146 |
his-little-troll chapter 1 . 5/7/2014 Great job! There were a few parts that the words got a bit confusing, but you did remarkably well considering. I read all of it... I don't know why I didn't realize I hadn't commented until I exited the story. That being said, if you still need a beta reader I would be glad to help. |
thequeen99 chapter 1 . 4/25/2014 I absolutely love multiple one-shots _ |