Wow this is really amazing please update soon

oh no you left it on a cliffy lol lol I really got into this lol really look forward to the next chapter , glad you updated this story xx

Great start, looking forward to the rest of your story.

I must admit I am not familiar with the characters or the show Kicking-it. It is very important that you introduce these characters to the reader as if they never met them. It will help the story. The Miami characters we are familiar with since we are on the Miami site. The Miami POV was very good and light hearted .

i really like this . look forward to more xx