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Did Carlisle really prefer or did Eddie tell him to prefer?
Why would he want them to keep a low profile when he played doctor all of the time?
Its a good thing she is dread of Jasper would have enjoyed killing her very slowly or should I say the Major would have.

I gather she isn't a shield in this story
Otherwise I think she would have messed Harper up when he went after Peter?
You would think that since they are mates he would be able to feel her.

Hell it ain't a good wedding unless there is a fight or two.
So what is that crazy bitch up to now?

I am surprised that she wanted to follow after those assholes that left her hanging with Vicky hunting her.
How can she hunt animals if she doesn't know the difference between .a wolf and a coyote. be glad when she
figures out it is better to hunt peoples instead of animals. its better for the environment and the planet to leave the creatures alone and go after
the parasite that is man.

Wish you would have written that the vamps could drink it makes for interesting times sometime when the can.
You would think after six years she could have talked him out of dressing like white trash.
I am surprised that the venom didn't fill him out some while he was changing or does it only do that to females to make them look sexier to their mate and victim?

Could have put the translation of what he said at the bottom of the page like some writers do when a vampire is speaking Italian or Greek. Lol.

I might have freaked out a bit with the mention of Katy, Texas... Which is my hometown! I feel all special now lol

Thank you for sharing your truly Wonderful story. I have enjoyed reading it.

This story is off to a very good start. And the writing is great.

I really do love Bella with Peter :D
Loved the story! Another well written story I couldn't put down haha :)

i have read several of your other stories but this is the first time for this one. it's the best peter and bella story i have read so far. jasper and bella or garrett and bella are still my most loved.

Oh such a bittersweet ending. But at least she can live in the knowledge that her direct past maybe gone but there’s still pieces of them out there. Children, grandchildren, probably great grandchildren too. Even Jake lives on in his nieces and nephews and any children they had too. And thought Charlie’s line may have ended with her, she’ll be there for eternity. I love this and the ending. Carlisle is an idiot though. Lol.

I don’t know if I’d trust Carlisle. He could tell Aro about the healer and then what? Besides, it’s human to fight battles against illness without supernatural means to heal us. If that’s what Edward wants then so be it.

Oh Aro, don’t be thinking of doing anything stupid now. So, Edward has felt the same loss as Jasper, he just won’t be able to fix it. She’d be 41 at this point. Unless she died. A wife, a mother, maybe even a grandmother. A life. One he’d never be able to take her from. He’d only be seen as her son in the eyes of the humans, and she’d likely never want to leave her family. Alice’s death was far too quick for my liking. At least it looks like he might have the comfort of Jane. Lmao