BRO THAT WAS SO GOOD I HAD BIG CUMM TIME ALLAH HUAKBAR GreeTING from IRAQ

I just read your story, and I have to say that it's amazing. I like how you try to make the story as historically accurate as you can possibly make it. I felt really sad when Lovino and Helina died. I really liked Lovino's last wish. It showed that he truly cared about Feliciano. Please continue this story. It is so good.

Oh my god

I bawled my eyes out when lovino died

How could you?! Bitch he deserved to live! Oh my god I am so fucking sad now!

Honestly this story makes me cringe so badly. What the hell. It's so unrealistic and moving way too fast.

And i hate how it seems you don't give two shits what happened that time and when the woman got raped. I understand that this is for the story and all but please at least make it seem like you care in the authors notes. Not like anyone even reads the authors notes. But yeah.

Okay first of all, what the hell.

This is moving waaaayyyyy too fast. Love doesn't happen that quickly. Their relationship is so unrealistic too. I think me and a lot of other people who have read this would say the same when I ask that you could fix this story to make it more realistic and more... accurate, I guess you could say. I'm actually quite disappointed. The story idea is good but I just wish that there was a better writer to create this story.

LOVINO DIED?! NO!

When will there be more?

Awesome story! You're a wonderful author!

FUCK YOU GIL. FUCK. YOU.

You're one to talk, Gil. Not sure what they did to albinos, but you're lucky to have your blonde-haired, blue-eyed brother with you

Thank you for making me cry like a baby

I was really hoping that somehow, Romano lived. Got taken out pd the line, had to do something else or got told to do something else. But I was upset to see him die. I was hoping that Romano at least had something to be happy about instead of just having his brother, but not all stories can be happy go lucky, I guess.

Great story, I'm liking it, though I'm curious to see how it is that Ludwig is going to get Feli out of this place?

Update soon.

This is very good! I did notice some small mistakes in the writing. Mainly missing a letter or adding another letter. Doesn't really matter, I knew what they were saying. :P Other than that, you are fantastic at writing! Of course, the chapter containing rape did make me uncomfortable but, I am happy that Feli took care of Helina afterwards. The last chapters gave me the "feels" as it is called. I have one question, how many more chapters will you be writing? Have a good day/night! - Rosie

Hi there (again) I have changed my mind about wanting to draw out my favourite bits. So it's fine. I'll just sit and read your writings instead of drawing it out. Have a nice day! - rosenecessities

Hello there, this story is very interesting. I love that it is historically accurate. I loved the GerIta bits as well as the feelsy bits. I hope it is ok if I draw some fanart to my favourite bits? Of course, I will credit you and have a link. Though it will go in my tumblr art blog: semi-good-art rather than my main blog. That is if I have your permission to do the fanart (if i do i will try my very best at the art. My style has somewhat improved!). :) Your writings very good, too! I also very much love your username. 3 Sorry if this is lengthy. Now, to patiently wait for the next chapter. Take your time. Bye! - rosenecessities