Reviews for Between The Lines |
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![]() ![]() Is this fic still alive? I read in the above notes that your country has banned FF.N, but you also wrote that you would post a new chapter and unless I am blindly missing something, that was not followed up on. And seeing as it has been a little more than three years I don't want to get my hopes up on having this fic continued. Even though I would really adore having it finished. All in all, this is a beautiful start to this fic, and for once L-Elf's character is pretty cannon and not OOC at all. His thoughts are probably and actions are accordant. As are Haruto and Shoko. I have a few stray ideas that might help you lead up to the ending you speak of-again going off of your notes-and would very much like to read said ending. -A hopeful reader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful - no seriously! The writing style, the characterisation, at some points I had to shove my face into my pillow because the emotions were too much :D And Haruto is so endearing...*sigh* I know it's been a while but I hope you come back to finish this someday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wha.. this site really needs more HaruEru fics! Don't tell me you're not continuing..! -sniff- It was fun reading it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm shipping the l-elf and haruto ... So love the plot and the story. I like how it developed and how you introduce other characters. Sniff'- so fun to read. Please update more |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this story!it hard to find haruto x l-elf story is really great!it really interesting!keep up the good work.I will support you and keep waiting for your updates until the end. : ) |
![]() ![]() it's really good. i liked very much. but i would liked more if u pout some romence:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank God ya didn't make Haruto a stalker (: |
![]() ![]() lol. Haruto getting Shouko to teach him to make youkan huh. He's definitely out to impress his Dorssian prince(cess?) I'm still trying to get away from all sorts of distractions to finish the fic. Managed to type a few more paragraphs today before the muse fled again. Wonder if it would come back during CNY. How strange for Indonesia to ban ffnet though, of all sites. What happened? Try switching the DNS to Google DNS? Well, back to typing. -Gwyn |
![]() ![]() it's a very nice story. I like it. It's very nice if you make one or two chapter from Haruto's perspective not only L-elf. I want to know about how they end up and I hope you release another chapter soon. Thank you for your hard work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg you're back! I was worried that you abandoned this fic!It sucks that this website is banned in your country but I'm glad you managed to come back :') |
![]() ![]() This's great! I do love it, you're writing it so well. Please update soon! I'll be waiting :D |
![]() ![]() Oh prettt please update This is so good. Your writing style is very enjoyable and you capture their personalities well. I can't wait to find out what happens next - |
![]() ![]() Hi there, I'm reena Your story is so cute 3 Update it please and keep the good work :) |
![]() ![]() Hope you upload more :) I love it |
![]() ![]() The chapter was wonderfully written! Although I personally felt that the character growth department could have been more refined, by above all else, it was great! Please keep writing! |