I saw this roughly when you published it, but i've been busy all day, and now finally I have had time to finish my OC for your template! :) The story so far isn't what I expected from the summary, i'll tell you that. I expected him to be...slightly more feral. But he reminds me more of just a homeless boy, rather than him having spent basically his whole life thus far in the wild with pokemon. It's probably the reading thing and the fact that he talked to Ibiki so calmly. I mean, yeah, he freaked out at first, but...you get what i'm trying to say, probably. I enjoyed it either way, it's well-written, and most importantly - unique! Very original indeed, I love it. I quite like Akiko, too! I'll go PM you that character anyway.

Name: natsu kouya

Gender: male

Age :17

appareance:Blond mid-short hair, blue eyes , normal height,normal heiht, not too tought,always with a headphones

Personality (Be descriptive):nice, but lazy, love sleeping, he can be very polite and very gentleman because of where he was raised, sometimes he is a little innocent and oblivious, love to see everyone smile, so he smile a lot, love pokemon.

History:his family traveled a lot because his dad was an professor, he love travelling with his family especially since he love his parents and his sister, Lily, but one day when he was playing tag with his sister in ruin,his found a dark crystal and in flash a booty trap was in action that made the ruin collapse, a moment later he was the only one alive, he took the crystal with him

regret: not dying at the place of his sister that is why

weakness: not being able not to fall asleep, lazy, dislexya, pessimist sometimes
strenght: care bout his friends, intelligent, good with any wild pokemon

Likes:loves sleeping, eating, making food , playing piano, and loves reading manga, math an physics, music

Dislikes: too much hard work, being awake, litterature, history and bad weather, also jerks he hates seen his freinds crying

Clothes (Regular, Swimming, Formal, Sleep, Winter):regular: black jeans, white shirt, blue converse, black crystal, black headphones: last gift from his parents( wear it all the times)

swimming: white swimming trunk

formal: black tux with a black shirt and a red tie

sleep: black pants and a red shirt with pandora hearts on it

winter: blue pants, a black jacket under it, black sweater under it

opinion of Akiko: doesn't really care as long that he isn't annoying, and noisy,

fears: seeing someone esle die in front of him

Romantic Interest (What your character would look for in a boyfriend/girlfriend.):don't really know, a nice person who truly cares about her friends and love eating his food and hearing play ( i don't really know but i know i would love if you can ship him with someone)

Pokemon:
aura: lucario: aura sphere, dragon pulse,close combat, extreme speed
call natsu his master, humble
air: dragonair: dragon breath, fly,surf, hyperbeam
loves natsu, especially sleeping with him, he has the same character as Natsu
they can be powerful when needed

Whoa. Alright, this definitely left me wanting to know his past and his future with the OC's :) I can't wait to see where this goes. I'll send an OC ASAP :)

I knew this felt familiar somehow, and when you said ot was inspired by HDD, I just knew from were that familiarity came from.

Well, while I can say that it reminds me of HDD, it still feels rather different in a way. You could almost say that it's like a sibling. Since you both have rather different styles in writing, and the way you build up is not the same.
But as usual, you just have a very nice way of writing, and I just really can't find anything I dislike in this.

I am liking Akiko right now. Raised by pokemon, can't go wrong with that. And he has a Mightyena and Grovyle, can't go wrong with that either. Looking forward to see what will happen to this lad in the future.

Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)

SHOUTOUT! Thanks, man, you have no idea how much that means to me, and I definitely want to see this story through. Obviously, nothing is perfect, so just watching out for those little grammar mistakes will help it flow a bit better, but other than that, I like the story and Akiko's character, but then again, I'm a sucker for things like this. I'll definitely submit an OC, and can't wait for more of this. Ja na.

A nice start, I wonder who he'll bring with him if he decides to go.

I'm hooked for... *stops to think* I think the third time... but anyways, definitely coming up with yet another OC. And definitely checking out HDD. I will now spend my time reading HDD while brainstorming another character.