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Hate Loki.

We all know Loki was happy to see himself kill Thor.

Loki's wrong it does make sense. It makes sense because loki has been suicidal from the end of thor 1, ragnarok amde me think he might have recovered but endgame showed me i was wrong loki was still suicidal then

Loki does have a point though the spirits arent supposed to be thus buased and thiae memories wpuldnt serve as anything but more reasona for loki to go ahead with his admittwdly largely stupid and desperate plan

The hilarious thing is i can see tom hiddleston as loki asking odin thor's question!

Okay, Hogan's "Give it time" line made me snort coffee. I liked it. The differences in the plot here were really cool. I expected it to divert more from the original plot of the movie, but, in retrospect, I'm glad it didn't. This made it somehow more interesting. Lots of fun!

I wondered what you were going to do for the future. Very nice. Can't wait to see how you finish it!

I liked the idea of Loki being a pain in the ass when they go out adventuring. That was funny. And the Coulson/Fury dialogue was really entertaining. And Clint's 'one of these days I'm going to work up the courage to ask you what exactly you remember happening when we went there' was gold. I can SEE Renner saying that. And Jane saying Darcy's mind was a terrifying place was perfect. I also loved the reference to Dicken's 'Ignorance and Want'. That's always been one of my favorite parts of the story and I love that you paid a tribute to it here!

"Manners are becoming a rare commodity'. I love how cool he is about all of this. And 'The horse gave Thor a deeply unimpressed look" made me laugh. And the Sleipnir part almost killed me. And Loki's got a really good point about Odin's peace-keeping. Never thought of that. Whose side is he ON anyway? lol. "Genocide, Thor?" Love it! And that last memory was powerful. Never thought how that conversation must have gone.

This is hysterical. I really enjoyed the argument with Sif, and that last conversation. Can't wait to see where this goes! I love the story of 'A Christmas Carol', and while this isn't the first time I've seen Loki mixed into it, it IS the first time I've seen it done this way, and I think this is much more entertaining. Kudos to you for writing it! And I like all the nods to the mythos!

... would anyone call me weird if I said that when loki was telling thor about his adoption instead of feeling on edge I was GIGGLING the whole time. xD just... hilarious. thank you for this. now we can only hope that it ends in the movies just as well for loki. *shrugs* but if not we can all just go into happy denial like we did with sirius and write our OWN endings. :p

Well...Thor is still going to suck at being king till he grows up, Loki is momentarily distracted from his plan to show how badly it would work out, so that's helpful, and we get to meet the Avengers. I liked Darcy and Jane's conversation the best, as it was the most surreal.

Sadly, Odin is *still* totally clueless.

Excellent view of the past-Thor is loving and *totally* clueless. He's so used to being favored he really has no idea of how it looks to others. Sadly, Loki is still right about Thor not making a good king, at least not yet, though his little plan rather obviously didn't work out the way it was supposed to.

Neat chapter! (and your voice for Loki is absolutely perfect).

This is so brilliant! Love your writing.

Great story!