Reviews for Crossing the River
TheLegendaryGuy chapter 7 . 11/4/2016
This was one of the best pokeshipping stories I've ever read. I mean, things seemed to be so natural and all. I really loved this story.
Mrs. Nose chapter 7 . 9/6/2016
Wow, that was such a great read. Your characterization was on point and even though the plot was rather simple, the story was really enjoyable. I had a great time reading it and I'm shocked that you don't have more reviews. You certainly deserve more! I'm sorta upset I didn't review every single chapter (I'm not the type that reads everything and then reviews, but I guess I was so engrossed by the story that I didn't want to break my reading spree). So I swear that when I reread this I'll leave a review every single chapter!
I'd like to finish by saying I hope to see more pokeshipping stories from you in the future :)
NijiBrush chapter 7 . 8/26/2016
Wow. I just spent the last few hours reading this in one sitting, and yeah should I say wow again? This was amazing, awesome and completely heartwarming. Not only because I’m a die hard Pokeshipper, but just from a writing standpoint this was amazing. The way you painted the world the story was set in and described all the details was wonderful. The world felt so vivid, as did your original characters. Outstanding job. I really feel like I have a deeper grasp of Ash and Misty’s relationship and personally dynamic after reading this. Bravo. Very well played.
Almandine-Azaleea chapter 7 . 4/25/2016
This was utter perfection and is now my new head canon! Your characterisation of the trio, and the Pokemon was spot on! Everything was just so well planned, described and articulated. I have not stopped squeeing periodically since chapter 2. I am so happy I came across this story! Absolutely brilliant job!
mdn.aurion chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
reread it :)
MegSkoomaPirate chapter 7 . 9/17/2014
Okay, completely serious here, this was one of the best things I have ever read! It so amazingly fantastic! Great job!
Chastaine chapter 7 . 6/23/2014
This is a really well written story. You have an amazing talent for keeping characters in-character and would absolutely love a sequel! Best wishes and thank you for writing such good story.
KatoKathy chapter 7 . 5/25/2014
This is such a great fic, I dunno why it doesn't get more reviews!
Everyone was completely in character and it seems like something that can totally happen in the storyline XD Thanks for a nice read!
YuniX-2 chapter 7 . 3/25/2014
It's insane that this story doesn't have more reviews. It's absolutely FANTASTIC. Totally in character, well written, and very plausible for the series. Plus, it's nice to see a fic about Ash and Misty getting together during the time frame when I was still watching the show. To me, Pokemon will always be Ash, Brock, and Misty. When I think of how Ash and Misty would get together, it's usually about how it would have happened during this or an earlier portion of the shows run. It's good to see that I'm not the only one who thinks this way.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
I loved it! This is definitely one of the best pokemon fics I've ever read. Do you plan on writing more pokemon fanfiction? If you do I would love to read them.
MadienOfTheMoonlight17 chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
I loved every word of this! Seriously, I haven't read a fanfic this good in ages! Great to know there are still authors worth while here!
mdn.aurion chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
You characterized well Ash, Misty and Brock, did a nice job at discribing the beauty pageant and its phases. I guess you just need to work a little bit harder at battle scenes and Misty didn't have Gyarados at Johto. Nice conclusion, really liked it. Hope you write more stuff.
lizzyd710 chapter 7 . 12/15/2013
VBFD GHAADJSFJJD AMAZING. YOU NEED TO MAKE A SEQUEL.
Valhyre chapter 7 . 12/14/2013
This was beautiful , why do good things have to end ;_;
It was fantastic, thanks for giving us the readers a great fic.
skyent chapter 7 . 12/14/2013
Out of this world.
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