| Reviews for after the end |
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   Flareon153 chapter 5 . 5/12/2014 you splet so many words wrong person and you don't write very well you know i bet i could bet you in a writing compition if i wanted so there |
| Taerisi chapter 1 . 12/16/2013 I would strongly recommend using paragraphs to break up your writing. Long chunks of text are not appealing to readers. |
