Reviews for One-Horse Town |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Those buddies need to STFU (pardon my Merle language). Axel is a sweet guy Her deserves someone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is one of my favourite stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() This reminds me of growing up in a small town. |
![]() ![]() I’m so touched by carol’s confidence in Daryl in this chapter. I’ve read sweet junction so many times and I can still remember carol being so insecure in the start of their relationship. It’s amazing to see her grown so much. This is why I love multi chapters long ass stories. It lets you see the development of the characters. Thanks for writing! You’re the best! |
![]() ![]() I may have gasped a little to loudly when I saw the chapter notification on my phone and I may have scared the stranger standing next to me. |
![]() ![]() I'm so happy your writing this story again. I've alway loved this little universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for continuing ... And for getting a babe for Axel. Does Patricia like dogs? :) |
![]() ![]() I’m excited for this! I love everything you write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol merle setting asap up on a date is great. glad you changed the name to something you liked better, I remember all that mess and honestly always stick to your guns. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great to see you back. I love all your stories. don't let anyone criticise the way you write . you create a great story |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to sign in but this is my real username on here. You can absolutely private message me to bounce ideas if you want. But to throw some random ones at you... - axel is one of the first to come in for a haircut but he gets a mustache trim! - speaking of axel, he had a lot more action in the last story, could he maybe find a woman - did you want alice to be in this story, either mel could be the therapist that andrea goes to, or someone could have heart issues and start going to see alice...maybe alice has a friend who'd dig axel? - i really liked how andrea told merle what was on her mind when they had the jar talk, knowing merle, he'd probably slip up, so maybe more jar talk - i also see the girls being the type to frame their first paying customers bills Ok that's all I got lol, maybe something will get the juices flowing there! |
![]() ![]() Loving it so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay - You’re back! Love this story and glad you are able to make your way back to it and have it written the way you want it without the negative influence of others. Keep up the great work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy to see this story is back. |