IM LOSING MY FUCKING MIND

BITCH WHAT THE FUCK
WHAT THE FUCK
WHAT THE FUCK
EXCUSE ME
WHAT
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JOLY SHIY
UTCH WHATGMAKSJD
I CANT TAKE IT
WHAT
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I hope Sepis dies

Hell of a deux ex machina if I've ever seen one. I'm a bit deflated, the writing is great, characterization is on point and the premise looks very interesting, but this breaks any suspension of disbelief.

Like, some transformations in DBS where already pushing it, but a magical device that multiplies your energy by 10000?

Like, I get that you wanted to avoid the heroes overpowering the villain but...there are so many different ways to go ahead without undermining a) How strong they've become in the scale of things, dealing with gods and universe-ending threats and b)The sacrifices and work they put to get there

Biological agents? Nanovirus? Vacuum generation? A lot of things that could topple the main characters while making sense of why no one used this on freezer or how 'conviniently" it just appears afterwards (eg. Freeza could've been inmune to biological agents, any nanotechnology could've been easily detected by their subjects, he doesn't need to breath...)

Knock them out, put some relaxants in their system and there you have your Z-fighters defeated without undermining everything else.

very well written! Great Job!

:)

Amazing news! This is the best dbz fanfic I have read.. it brought a story angle that didnt require stupid power boosts etc as it was something that couldn't be won with fists. I will vote

Voted! You honestly deserve it, this story is a goddamn diamond in a coal mine, and one of my all-time favorite DBZ fanfictions.

So proud of you! I will vote

amazing story! I really love it! though I admit, the first few chapters are quite boring with lots of flashbacks and introduction but since all of that is necessary for the plot,I don't mind it and keep reading and the story get better from every chapter..I'm not really fond of fanfic that have lotssssss of oc but I like oc in this story..ugh that nevrrest really get on my nerves! everytime reading about anything she's plotting against Vegeta and even Goku, make me want to pull my hair and throw my phone to the wall..ughhh! if she's a Canon villain, she might be the most hated villain..huhu..but I really love the character development, plots, a bit humor here and there, the action scenes, and all.. oh and I like on how you write about Goku and Vegeta's friendship been even more bloomingis it the correct word or I should only use "develop"?) in Justice fleet where Goku's been there with Vegeta most of the time.. a very long story but really worth reading..well done author!

Vegeta and Goku in that tube...damn! that's hilarious!

The suspension of disbelief is killing me, cant read any further than this chapter, thats for sure.

To anyone like me who checks reviews before they get into a LONG fic:

Absolutely read this. It is worth the time it will take. IMO the plot does not get “Goku’d.” Goku is an important character but his role in this is going ALL OUT to support his best buddy Vegeta in any way he can, and the character growth is unreal! Goku is a good man but he’s not the title character. Vegeta is. Also, you will CARE about the OC’s and THEIR character growth, so don’t be scared when they show up. And don’t worry, the tail is thematically important and not any funny business. ;)

Wow I am not okay

DAMN THAT'S GOOD SHIT!