FUCKING IDIOT FANFIC! USELESS! TRASH!

Hmm, mental hospitals have buff orderlies bro. Clarissa is a ten year old little girl. Where did she get a weapon? A knife, because she won't have the strength to kill with a blunt object, mad or not. And the authorities just decided to off a kid, just like that, even went and constructed a "special room", just for her? 2/10 bro.. Just no

I hope it update soon

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow...,...,,,

that was a very ori story and you did a great job of writing hope you are not done yet and you will be updating and keep writing more so thank you for the great read

So the Naruto in this story is a sadistic fuck of a rapist who uses mind control to quite literally break the women of his enemies?

No thanks.

Your story your rules but goddamn, your Naruto is more sick, twisted and fucked up than all Devils of the 72 Pillars combined and that is not for me.

Awesome

No. No hiding their power crap.

Naruto is pathetic for needing magical dust to ensure women's loyalty towards him.

Okay, the cuckold song scene is pretty hilarious.

The writing quality of this story is eye-cringingly bad, and these chapters had been beta'd? Thoughts are inconsistently stylised. Commas exist at the ends of certain spoken sentences and thoughts when there should be periods. There are plenty of wrong word usages to be found. Variations of the present tense are periodically found in a story written in the past tense. The dialogue is flat and not very believable. The women are unbelievably shallow. Elements of other franchises are inappropriately applied (UBW, WTF?!).

Ohhhh, Naruto moves fast jeez. 2 mind controls in kust one chapter. Can't wait to see what is his game plan.

Finally! I found the kind of story i have been looking for! OP!Naruto gets betrayed and now is seeking revenge!
I just hope he doesn't abandon it :/. Still this story is right up my alley and good job with the prologue but it was perhaps a bit rushed

I loved everything I read in this story, I hope you keep it up as I am looking forward to continue reading it.

muy buen capitulo y muerte memorable