Beautiful chapter. Fantastically written, very professional. I love it, I do wish you would continue with this story I would love to read more.

I really enjoy the flashbacks, what Johanna's mother said about Capitol traits in districts and how you knew instantly what had happened. Masters of Being Ignored, love it!

Short but sweet, I love it. A good way to reunite to lovers

I really loved this chapter. Johanna's family background is so interesting. Thank you and hope to read more

Truly enjoying this read right now. Thank you so much for writing this.

The long hiatus actually got me to go back to the beginning and re-read it, which I enjoyed very much, so thank you! Poor Johanna. I can't wait to see what you have in store for her next!

The way you use language and words is so beautiful. Still so in love with this story.

CH. 4 is the perfect Thanksgiving story,either as a standalone or as part of longer tale.

The best line comes from Johanna's mother:
"IT DOESN'T MATTER WHERE WE ARE. AS LONG AS WE'RE TOGETHER."

That would sound awesome as part of the blessing at a holiday dinner table.
I GIVE THANKS TO YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER.

A BLESSED THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.

Wow this is really great!

Dunno if you're still working on this or not, but I absolutely love it. Only just found it today and got hooked straight away, devoured it in one sitting.

Your characterization of Johanna is superb too, exactly how I imagine she would have been before losing everything: still feisty and a certainly jaded from the games, but not quite as completely pissed off at the world. She's the same fierce woman but with a little hope and happiness still left in her life, and you've set it up marvelously for it all to come crashing down.

Overall, your writing is spectacular and I would certainly look forward to reading more.

Gosh. This was great.

I really like the depth in this chapter. Great job capturing Johanna's emotions. And I like the little peek of Katniss and Prim.

Hm, is it Katniss staring at Johanna at the end?

Judging by that last line, johanna really has a way with words doesn't she? Haha. Im excited about this, her being in 12. This is the closest she's technically been to katniss yet. There's such an impending doom looming about though. Everybody knows it's coming. Im just waiting on it to drop. Cant stop reading this story.

Oh god. Things are gonna get bad, aren't they? I can feel it.
Great chapter! I look forward to the next one.
I can't help but feel like I might know the girl in 12 with the accusing stare ...