Reviews for The Void |
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Guest chapter 3 . 1/17/2017 you should update the story its really good |
macktri123 chapter 3 . 12/16/2013 I think it's pretty good, just make sure to capitalize the names... It annoy's me SO MUCH as Bill must hate Pine Tree and Shooting Star (In Bills words) |
awesomenesshasar chapter 2 . 12/8/2013 Hmm, it's a little rushed, but otherwise very good. Keep at it and update soon! |