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I loved the story till the end. The ending left me confused.

I don't like Elijahs betrayal I just hope she doesn't forgive him as Elena isn't pathetic. You are extremely talented writer as I want to throw my tablet at the wall I'm getting so angry at her treatment im unsure if il be able to finish it I love Elijah an don't want this to colour my fantasy of elena an elijah

Your writing is incredible; I was instantly captivated!

Love this chapter had many laughs

What what what! Ahhh I’m so confused with the ending! Ahhh gotta know what happens.

But seriously this story has been so bloody amazing! I’ve been hooked reading this all weekend from start to finish. From captives to family. It’s so good! Cannot wait to read your sequel xx

It's a VERY good fic so far, but you seem to be lacking in knowledge and imagination when it comes to the sex bits.

Ummm the turning into a vampire conversation has happened twice now lol

Um why is this rated M?

That was pretty good.

Ok she’s supposed to have a date thing that night right? So shouldn’t she not be doing the dirty deed with anyone at the moment?

Honestly I’m surprised she hasn’t attempted suicide or something with the way most of them have been treating her.

Aside from Freya, Finn is the eldest of the mikaelson siblings, not Elijah.

I just wanted to tell you that you are my favorite writer in this whole fan fiction universe. Your stories are SO good.. they remind me of those old VC Andrews books I grew up loving so much. I've noticed that at times you have mentioned sad thoughts in your own mind, and I just wanted to tell you that you are amazingly talented and incredibly gifted. Thank you so much for all the Elejah goodness you have contributed to the world :) Have a wonderful day!

I can't believe this story is over. I'll definitely be checking out the rest of your writing. I attempt not to read stories that haven't been completed because I've had too many authors abandon good works, but I'm glad you kept this one. It's honestly one of my favorite TVD fics. I really liked how you portrayed the originals. When they witches did that blood bride spell though, I chuckled a bit because awhile ago Kol had joked about becoming their step mom. Great work on this!