This was really interesting to see past Emma and Killian interacting with each other and how the rest of the group reacted to them. I liked when David called Killian his Neverland roommate.

THIS WAS FANTASTIC YES I LOVED IT

Pan ships them lol

. . words literally can't express hiw awesome this story is. soooooo cool. i absolutely loved. now one of my absolute favourites. i loved the canon divergence, so interesting and unique. the whole plot was really really creative. I've never read anything even close to it. the whole idea of yound emma and hook was really fascinating. i loved the true love's kiss moment at the end. the whole king was just so brilliant and creative, you really couldn't fault you. the only thing i regret is not finding this fic sooner when the neverland arc was happening on OUAT. thank you for sharing such an awesome story.

This story was awesome! Well written and exciting, a totally new plot than anything I've read. I loved Henry saving the day and Killian sacrificing himself for Emma. I think it would be complete if Neal got a hard punch to the face though. I have next to no love for him so I really liked this story.

The only thing though was that all this occurred after the Echo Cave confessions (that's how they got Neal out) so Charming would have already told them all about not being able to leave. In your story no one else knows but Killian and Charming. Once I noticed this though I just imagined that Charming confessed some other secret in the caves.

Very well done, I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more attention on here than it has. Thanks so much for sharing this, now onto your other works! Cheers!

Beautifully written. I loved younger hook and younger Emma meeting. I pictured it in my head while reading and it was so adorable!

Loved that ending! I just love captain swan and henry so much! Just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story! :)

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THAT WAS ADORABLE. THAT WAS AMAZING. I was totally surprised by the ending. This was beautifully written and I could totally imagine it being a real episode. Especially the Captain Swan kiss! That was genius, bloody brilliant (and amazing) how you did that. I always knew they were true loves. I'm so happy. So so happy. Indescribably happy. Bloody overjoyed.
You are awesome.
Peetagrl3-TheRollyJoger

So good. I love this. I just...Killian...Emma...this whole ordeal is OHMYGOSHIMFREAKINGOUTTHISISAWESOME.
Literally.
Great chapter, Pan is a TURD. blah. Blah. Blah. Blah. I don't like him.
But I love your writing!

Whoa.
Man.
That was awesome. It was really good, not OOC At all. In fact, I found it quite accurate. Lovely so far...I MUST know where this goes from here. Great job!
Peetagrl3-TheRollyJoger

Amazing, great! I wish that the story did go this way. It's much more gratifying in all facets for all characters. Makes more sense considering the history. Even Neal.

NOOOOO! I hate Neal so much but I dont understand why he would want to separate Emma and Killian I get that he likes her but WHY!

That was great, I absolutely adored it! :) x

I really wish this had happened in the show but noooooo they had this big Henry and Peter switchero and this long winter hiatus! }:( Suffice to say, I like your story better. :)

this was a great !