i dont know how you managed to write a chapter about a battle with no action scenes, but it worked for me! good dialogue is more important for me, so maybe thats why.
im not sure if you will come back to writing or if you will read your reviews, but i just wanted to say that i fell in love with this fic anyway.
at first i was kinda sceptical because of that dream scene (which i thought wasnt a dream at all at first) in the first chapter, but you quickly won me over with your writing style and in-character dialogue (srsly, its so good!). im a sucker for slow burns and i usually lose interest after the characters confess their love, but i really enjoyed the way you portrayed their relationship. there was drama, there was tension and it seemed very believable to me.
you are an amazing writer imo and i hope everythings going well for you.

I wish you'd come back and update this. This is one of my favorite femshep x miranda story. I really love your style of writing.

was wonder if there time there get interrupted by them .

fun see how far those two will go .

fun stuff .

was wondering when they get there .

so sad they both wanted it there . fun see who breaks first .

Fucking terrible. First Mark Meer and Jennifer Hale were equal in terms of voice acting in Mass effect 2. And in Mass effect 3 Mark Meer blew Jennifer Hale out of the water. The thing is everyone kept saying she was better in Mass effect 1 but fail to realize he kept getting better and she kept getting worse.

FUN SEE WHAT SHE DOES .

i wish you didnt assume that anyone that reads this has played Mass Effect 2. I just so happenned to have only played part 1 and 3, and I have no idea what is going on sometimes. I have no idea what miranda is upset over and who Oriana is and so on. Oh well w/e i can deal with it

omfg 9yo miranda was SO friggin hilarious XD

so far this is one of the best romances ive ever read. tysvm for writing this!

I love how you were having miranda question why she was having sex with shepard in her dream, despite the consequences. dreams really are like that a lot of times. great writing

Wish there was more

I'm really more of an audience/reader rather than a reviewer but I have to say, I loved this story and really look forward to seeing what you'd do should you decide to continue this. Shepard's humor is just the best! Really fitting in my mind and so entertaining. Thank you for writing this.