"I never leave a job unfinished, even if it takes 10 years"

*Six years later, has not posted another chapter*

Shame too, this was gathering steam as a good story.

Yes, that's pretty much what realistic Girls Und Panzer looks like

Edgelord stuff isn't necessarily a deal breaker, but confusing frivolous seemingly pointless setting breaking edgelord nonsense is. Pity. Spelling and grammar isn't bad.

It really is a pity. The idea seems fine, though perhaps a bit more edgy than I'd usually prefer. However I couldn't read past this chapter. I don't hold any faith in a story that opens so unnecessarily against the apparent setting. That's not to say you can't do supernatural stuff in an apparently mundane setting. Just, if you do, make it good, like Clannad's animes.

I just found this, and I'm really liking it. I've always wondered how things would go with a darker Miho, I look forward to seeing how this plays out. Keep up the great work, I hope you update this soon.

UPPIDATEEEHHHH

Great start, can't wait for the next chapter.

Regards Prince

I like your technical explanations concerning the tanks of the GuP universe.
Borys

Nerdgasms FTW :)
Distrubance in the Force - LOL!
Snarky comments on Hana in the pool - LOL again :)
Borys

I finally did the number - 200 "lateness events" is close to the total number of schooldays ... :)
Borys

Interesting.
The contrast between the chirpy girls in those ridiculous minis skirts and the gore in the text is amusing.
A "down the chimney" shot seems farfetched, but all sort of wierd shit happened in RL, so, why not at 2 pounder shell into the barrel of the kwk 37?
Borys

So you are implying using a T18 noob basher for roughly 200 games without premium account to afford dat GLD? Jeez, what pro :D Although, the StuG III is a more believable and concievable option as by now you kinda know what you are doing and even without a prem account and getting 300-500 damage games on average for twenty or thirty games you can get the Rammer...
Enough with the WoT noob calculations and bashing, Great story mate! friggin hell, dat first chapter tho! also, if you are not too... homophobic, would you consider some hawt FxF pairing in there? also, please write another chapter plz plz plz, I beg you as much as I begged my parents for fifty euros to get me a Type 62!
Oh, if you want a Beta for this, I'm available :)
WoT name (EU) TheMexicanJew
Sayonara, Das Vidanya, Adeus, Goodbye or whatever
JP

This gave me PTSD

Fairly good writing in genneral. The only problems I ran into was the rather jarring switch from well-used technical vocabulary to a much less diverse English for the non-tank bits. Props for the work- it works very well.

Absolutely awesome story! Would love to read more!

If I were in charge of Mako, that girl would be on her way to a doctor, right NOW. I'd want to have her checked out for hypoglycemia, hypotension, depression and possible mild narcolepsy. And I'm sure I haven't covered all the possibilities. There is something _wrong_ there.