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Had it been just Naruto and Sasuke, then sure. But nooo you had to add convoluted bullshit that doesn't make any sense. I already had to skip over Sasukes part, because it was just plain horrible, and I was hoping atleast Naruto's part would stay good, but nope first fight scene he just stands their like an idiot for no reason.

This is pretty awful

:WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow...,...

thank god I found this again, I loved it a lot ;; I lost the title halfway through reading and forgot the name, so it took me a while to find this fic again, hope to finish it this time!

I know it's been a while since you've come back to this fic, but I hope that you can finish it one day, especially since there only a few more left to go! I really like the writing, and I've gotten quite invested in it now.

Yo please finish this story. It’s been over a year since the last update and I hope you haven’t abandoned it just yet. You’re nearing the end anyways so I’d hope you have some plans to end it soon. I’m a genuine fan over here lol.

I'm still wondering why Naruto did not try to use the Rinne tensei jutsu to revive Aika. After all, he's like a pseudo Jinchuruki of the ten tails.

i really wish sasuke was the only one that came back in time. i hate this naruto with every fiber of my being.
the only reason the juubi exists is because naruto didn't want to kill obito
i mean even if there was peace between everyone, what happens when naruto's generation dies?
and how is naruto even supposed to achieve this peace? no one bothers to question his beliefs and he never gives any solid arguments. he's still a child who sees everything in black and white. and whenever he's asked about it his immediate and only response is : "iF THerE iS sUcH a tHiNG aS TrUe pEaCe i'Ll FiNd iT. bEliEve iT!"

naruto and sasuke are literally demi-gods on earth yet everything is starting to turn into canon with this dumb i-wanna-be-friends-with-everyone-naruto. i had high hopes when i started reading this fic but it completely fell apart

So many unnecessary losses because Naruto keeps talking the people and getting emotional. And when you think he’s not, he continues to make the same mistakes.

It actually makes me mad that Naruto prioritized trying to use Talk no Jutsu on Sasori and let Kakuzu get away with the 8-tails

Storywise, it's not my cup of tea, but as far as the writing goes, I salute you.

It’s 01:26am, I just realised this has 105 chapters, and I am READY

Aaaaanndd naruto keeps acting the greatest idiot in the goddamn universe! I HAVE NO WORDS TO SAY ABOUT HIM! HE'S JUST A COMPLETELY MORONIC BRAT WITH NO IDEA WHAT HE IS DOING! WAS HE DROPPED ON HIS HEAD AS A KID! WHY THE FUCK CAN HE NOT UNDERSTAND A SINGLE THING GOING ON!? OH MY FUCKING GOOODDD! WHY IS HE ACTING SO CLUELESS AND IDIOTICALLY! I'm seriously starting to hate this naruto! And does the idiot still need a clone to make a simple rasengan! Its a complete weakness! Why can't he try to make one singlehandedly! He needs fucking clones to do everything for him! How the hell can you even say that he is one of the strongest shinobi when he is like this? This guy is just an idiot! I think I blew a vein in my head reading this naruto... this story is awesome but I just wish you had not made naruto this moronic and naive. He lives in a ninja world for fucks sake! Has he no common sense?! How more naive can he get! I really wish you had given naruto a few more brain cells. This one is just pathetic. It's a good thing I'm never going to watch canon. That thing was just bullshit! He can't possibly have grown this naive with the life he had. I have no words to say... sigh. I'm just raising my blood pressure thinking about this so I'm not going to anymore. I hope everyone naruto is close to dies! The fucking moron deserves it! Atleast then maybe he will come to his senses. He should see them all massacred and as bloody corpses that people have spat on. Rotten Rowan was a good book in that regard. It showed what happened to his 'precious people' when he tries to save everyone. Wishes that happens to him! And then maybe he can go the way that yakumo did!

Why would he need anything else anyway? Minato's kunai is awesome! But 45 is not really a good number. He would need at least a 100. What the hell is he going to do with 45. He should have atleast asked for 50. And I think matatabi saiken and chomei are all female. Female kurama would have been awesome as well. And why the hell is he still so hostile with that woman? I thought he was supposed to be forgiving?! His anger is entirely unacceptable. She did nothing wrong to him! He's just being stupid right now! MFing moron! He has better things to do than keep a grudge! I hate it when naruto has this kind of reckless stupid moronic attitude! Its the reason older naruto is awesome! When naruto becomes hokage he has a better head on his shoulders. This one is just plain stupid. But I have to say that Akira is awesome! Naruto x Akira is the best! And I think his name is supposed to be kirabi not blue bee...