Funny

that is some Ash Ketchum/periodic table level density and I can see that happening too

oh my God, is such cluelessness actually humanly possible?

This has to be the single most supidly funny Harry ever.

I usually don't read stories this short anymore, but I am glad I read this one. Gave me the muse I needed to finish the next chapter of my own story!

awesome chapter i really this is the first of many chapters to come and not simply a one-shot chapter as that would be very disappointing any good luck with your stories

12 children! I don't know whether to be jealous of harry or pity him. XD

A bit strange, but still fun one-shot.

Funny job

I love it ! I'm a big fan of Fleur/Harry and I absolutely love it

Nice little one shot.

Glad some of the deaths in cannon were avoided

Cute little fluff story.

nice very nice
Draco122

I'm absolutely this story isn't a thousand times more popular than it is! I love it, you've given us background information through dialog, and yet implied plenty so that it wasn't blatantly obvious while still we know that Harry isn't in the same timeline. I'm a big fan of Fleur/Harry, and honestly I hate how most fics are an angsty Harry dominating Fleur. I just love how it's sweet, and Fleur isn't overly submissive, and rather dominant as she demands kids from Harry. I only I knew how Harry knew to change the timeline exactly, how he started to love Fleur, and how Fleur deviated from Bill, but it's more curiosity than actually feeling like I need to know. Very well written, though the French accent was a little harsh on the eyes, it was very good. I'd read it again.

Funny and romantic. I liked it.