Hellooo :DDD
I just discovered your fanfiction two days ago and just finished reading it until the latest chapter! I really like your work since I'm a big fan of Smoker and haven't found other Smoker fanfiction that I would like read. I hope life is treating you well! Can't wait for the next update :))))))

I love how Rill is not a carbon copy of Luffy but you can immediately tell they're siblings by virtue of the fact she's brutally honest and unaware of social conventions half the time. Well, she read about it but either she doesn't care or it flies past her. She's a studious oddball and human disaster of questionable decisions.

I can't believe it took me how many chapters to realize her full name is "Riddle" lmao. I've been wondering what that postscript was about, I feel stupid.

Gotta love how Smoker has more family revelations he hasn't unravel yet, specifically Dragon (and Sabo). At least Garp would be happy to know his granddaughter hooked up with a marine. If we ignore Law hahahaha!

Wonder what her brothers are planning.

That she almost died smiling is such a "D" thing. Love it.

I'm glad she got to see her brothers. I hope Smoker realizes that Luffy isn't the worst kind of pirate out there in Alabasta, and the situation between them becomes more complicated in a better way.

Thank you so much for updating! I’m absolutely loving this as well as NPNP. Awaiting your next update, I can’t wait!

Omg you updated! I just love this chapter so much. Thank you for updating ️

Thanks god you are still alive, this story is just so freaking precious for Smoker fangirls. I first read it years ago like I was just a college student, now I'm married and shit, time flies huh? Thank you so much for your update, it saves my shitty day. Sometimes I do love Rill more, she's like an old friend to me I guess.

I loved the chapter the sweetness and the bitterness as they try to deny the feelings they have.

ABSOLUTELY MY FAVOURITE CHAPTER OF THE STORY SO FAR. the break up killed me. Felt the bleeding hearts in that one. And smoker was SOOOOOO MEAN. Telling her that he regrets her only to snuggle her and stroke her cheek while she sleeps IMMEDIATELY AFTER TRYING TO ARREST BOTH HER BROTHERS! Smoker needs a punch from ace and rill needs to learn how to be honest hidding who her dad is now. I love her brothers and how loving and protective they are of rill even if smoker thinks they are awful while ace is literally damn near plotting his death. Love all of this chapter. Literally all of it and you still can't kill ace!

No matter how much they wish it they can’t truly hate each other! Even with his targets in sight Smoker cared more about getting Rill back! And though her brothers’ safety was on the line, all Rill wanted was for them not to fight Smoker. Ah love! See you next update!

yes! an update. thank you! it's been so long I think I need to reread and get a little refresher going but I'm so excited!

Definitely interested to see how things turn out for Rill and Smoker. See you next update!

Yay! Another update, I love this story and your OC. It's refreshing to have a sibling story with the main character and not being dragged everywhere with the main cast, but making their own way. Rill is vastly different but there are certain traits to her that make me go, yeah you can be their sister. Please keep updating, I see this story quickly becoming one of my favorites!

I appreciate your story a whole lot! I can't wait to see where it all goes. It's a bit of a shame Rill wasn't really a fighter, except to stubbornly stay alive. But it makes sense as she is a researcher, it would be cool if she got along with Chopper...
Will be watching this story from now on!

Thank you thank you thank you for updating! Im so excited to know what happens next.