this is a really gooood story!
usopp story is the best! :)

Omg how could you end it like that! How does he get back to the crew?

Oh feels. Oh angst. So much angst. It hurt to read about this, oh my gosh. I shouldn't like this, I really shouldn't, but it's really good. You wrote the emotions and trauma really well. It's really good, thanks for sharing your writing!

I wish there was more to this. You could really make a whole long story with this one-shot. I would really like to see the crews reactions to all of this. Anyway, great writing! Its kind of an unfortunate meeting for the two, but you did a good job with it! Thanksv for the story! :)

-Yvonne

Usopp!
Nooooo! ;A;

Wow. Kind deep

You know, I was doing pretty well during the rape scene, until it got to Usopp's hair...
From the a/n I guess you won't be making a sequel. I've gotta say, I much prefer your 'Envelope' story.