This is a really good example of what drug abuse does to people.

Mmmmmmmm sexy this definitely made me feel alive so I have to give you you feel up to it then please write one with BJ & Lydia having a family.

Loved it
Well written and very angsty
:)

In a way, this is the only way there relationship would work. *Grins*, I can imagine it likes this.

Well, I have that the premise is good and for the most part it was well-executed. There's a few moments that it seemed to lose its pace, though it didn't ruin it for me in a major way. A drunken Lydia Deetz is something you don't see every day, but you found a way tp go around this new one-shot.
There are still.a few spots whete I got it when it doesn't run as perfect as you would have liked.

In short, I am eager to see what are you planning in the future.
See ya.
sm4567.

I liked it! If I were to address your note in the beginning, I think what you may feel is that it's a little sparse, but it to me, it seemed to fit with the desolation of Lydia's life. So, in an artistic way, it works nicely as is!