Reviews for Melting
Ioasero chapter 5 . 1/23/2019
Hello all for who has been reading this! I actually just recently came across my account I'm thinking about getting out another three chapters, one including will be strictly NSFW. BUT I AM BACK! I will have other stories coming soon.
someone chapter 4 . 9/21/2016
can you please look over your work before u submit it there is alot of spelling errors and i have ocd and it makes me a lil mad
rabid koala XD chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
uhhh
continue!
Cupcak3 Lov3r chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
Ahhhhhhh more!
Fcwolfg chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
Great tension and build up! Can't wait for more! Update soon!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
That was, wow!
Ps: Please don't mind the spammers and keep up the good work
aether-nb chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
Hot damn! And what a way to end the chapter!

The content here is wonderful, but I noticed a couple grammatical and spelling errors, simple things. Perhaps you could find a Beta for your work? It's a good story; I'm sure you can find many people who would love to edit for you. :)

Can't wait for your next update!

Happy writing,
thesassygaypanda
catsmelt chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
hehe I like where this is going
Eclipsestorm4 chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
Good chapter, update soon please.
Johnny Storm chapter 4 . 1/21/2014
destroy it! Cast it into the fire!, why would I read this?, I really do not understand the appeal
Smaug chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I really do not understand the appeal, the depictions of the characters were bland, I really do not understand the appeal
Entei chapter 4 . 1/21/2014
just take it down, why would I read this?, On what planet is writing this bad acceptable?
Hindenburg chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
just take it down, what is this?,
CeliSB chapter 4 . 1/21/2014
Update
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
Dude, UPDATE ALREADY! Taking WAYYY TO LONG!
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