Reviews for Melting |
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Ioasero chapter 5 . 1/23/2019 Hello all for who has been reading this! I actually just recently came across my account I'm thinking about getting out another three chapters, one including will be strictly NSFW. BUT I AM BACK! I will have other stories coming soon. |
someone chapter 4 . 9/21/2016 can you please look over your work before u submit it there is alot of spelling errors and i have ocd and it makes me a lil mad |
rabid koala XD chapter 5 . 3/24/2014 uhhh continue! |
Cupcak3 Lov3r chapter 5 . 2/17/2014 Ahhhhhhh more! |
Fcwolfg chapter 5 . 2/6/2014 Great tension and build up! Can't wait for more! Update soon! |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/5/2014 That was, wow! Ps: Please don't mind the spammers and keep up the good work |
aether-nb chapter 5 . 2/6/2014 Hot damn! And what a way to end the chapter! The content here is wonderful, but I noticed a couple grammatical and spelling errors, simple things. Perhaps you could find a Beta for your work? It's a good story; I'm sure you can find many people who would love to edit for you. :) Can't wait for your next update! Happy writing, thesassygaypanda |
catsmelt chapter 5 . 2/5/2014 hehe I like where this is going |
Eclipsestorm4 chapter 5 . 2/5/2014 Good chapter, update soon please. |
Johnny Storm chapter 4 . 1/21/2014 destroy it! Cast it into the fire!, why would I read this?, I really do not understand the appeal |
Smaug chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 I really do not understand the appeal, the depictions of the characters were bland, I really do not understand the appeal |
Entei chapter 4 . 1/21/2014 just take it down, why would I read this?, On what planet is writing this bad acceptable? |
Hindenburg chapter 1 . 1/21/2014 just take it down, what is this?, |
CeliSB chapter 4 . 1/21/2014 Update |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2014 Dude, UPDATE ALREADY! Taking WAYYY TO LONG! |