Ups read the second part before the first. Now the other story makes more sense. Great story, I loved that Elizabeth and the other Enterprise crew are alive!

i LOVE this story
hopping for more

WOW! At the beginning you had me going. I had to go up to where the dates are published and make sure it was not a competed story. Great chapter. Can't wait to read the next. Thanks.

Poor Trip! He never seems to get a decent vacation.

This has been a great story. I re-read it to refresh my memory now that more of Season2 is available. I'm looking forward to that.

Wow! Such a better season than what we got. I would love to see more Lorian, but I really enjoyed where you took these characters...I freaked a little when I read the cliffhanger, but remembered this was a series of episodes...then I realized the next season is unfinished (yikes!)...but I am headed over there right now. :-)

It was so nice to see Trip and T'Pol having a lovely wedding that they could share with their family and friends.

OMG you are evil to leave such a cliffhanger. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Great job.

Good start can't wait to read the next chapter.

very good new chapter, but if all terra prime has been dismantled , and under arrest , who will want to kidnap Trip. ?

OOh, A twist:) Nicelly done. Hope for the best.

I like, I like, I like.

I have just finished reading the entire story so far and I found it quite good. I like what you have done so far and I would like to see what happens next keep upthe good work.

Remarkable, really remarkable.
The finale, then, promises a lot.
Ah, so Trip possesses telepathic abilities? Well, another talent is added to the treasure chest.

Another great chapter. Thanks

Damn! But how the hell did I to let it slip, such a beautiful story?
When I finished reading these chapters, I felt definitely better than how I felt before starting reading them.
And that says a lot!
BRAVO!