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i love the story! i love the writing style you used!
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i loved it

where was da buttfuck :')

The ending seemed open and a little of a let down but I enjoyed reading this.

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Talk about mood whiplash! It's great overall though! :)

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You are a goddess among mortal beings

An interesting turn of events in this chapter. We've gone from our unruly dorks being unruly dorks to an actually very emotional situation. The last few moments where we see the depth of Kaito's depression (when he thinks he's only okay when he knows people still care about him) was very heartbreaking and it will be quite an interesting read to see Kaito's reaction to Faker's proposal.

This is a really great and touching chapter. I have a teeny tiny correction: when you say 'kattobing' is a noun because "one is kattobing," you're using the word as an adjective: noun form would be "one is a kattobing." Sorry to be so nitpicky. Otherwise, this is a phenomenal story and a phenomenal chapter.

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Short and sweet little chapter we have here :) I like the little epiphany Kaito has that goes to show just how much he cares for Yuma, not to mention the little moments where it's supposed to be Yuma speaking Japanese- it really adds to the whole realistic feeling of this fic.

Another absolutely fab chapter what can I say

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