This is amazing!
love it!

no, cliffhangers are good and i cant wait for the next chapter. i cant wait to see what happens with jack

Hi, I like this story, you are really great, so I must ask, will you continue this story?

If we're talking movie-canon, swordfighting Hiccup isn't really a thing. But in book-canon, Hiccup is actually one of the best swordfighters in the books. They didn't know it at first though, because Hiccup was actually left handed and they taught him swordfighting using his right hand. In fact, Hoccup himself didn't know he was left handed until he was forced to use a sword with his left hand.

Anyway, this is a really great story and I enjoyed it a lot. I really hope you'll update soon!

so I'm reading this and then I saw an ad for with Anna Elsa on it lol

Intresting

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You're doing wonderful with the story, keep it up! And if you've read the HTTYD book series, Hiccup is actually quite excellent with a sword (he's left handed. It's in book 2, How To Be a Pirate)! If you want to stick to the movie though, that's fine too.

Fantastic! I love this chapter :D Hiccup is awesome too. I love how you made him a shield-crossbow, that was so cool! Hans seems to have dropped the facade, or has just simply tired of pretending to be good. I think it makes him a better villain :3 Keep up the good work!

Good chapter! I've been waiting for this. Although since Toothless' heart is forzen even Hiccup too. When Jack freeze the Kingdom of Arendelle, Huns or Pitch will kill him. Hiccup will save his life when his body is frozen. And Jack started to blamed himself for everthing and frozen Hiccup's heart. Then Hiccup's frozen body is thaw with a ture friendship.

I am so glad you updated. I hope to read more from you soon. This was such a good chapter, though I wonder what Pitch will do with Toothless, if Toothless is slowly freezing from a frozen heart. If Pitch takes over Toothless, then would Pitch get a frozen heart as well? And why would Pitch want Toothless as his puppet if Toothless won't be around much longer?
I hope you post a new chapter soon.

Grr... The cliffhangers are killing me! Ah! Gosh! So much happened in this chapter! Stupid Pitch! I can't believe that you had Hans break Jack's staff! Wow! So many feels in this chapter! Thanks you for updating! And no worries about the long wait... If it means a longer chapter then it is totally worth it! But please update again soon!

More update please. It's been months. I wanna know what Hans is gonna do with Jack. I bet Jack is gonna freeze the kingdom of Arendelle like Elsa did. And he accidentally struck Hiccup and Toothless' hearts.

Update

You just made a spin off of your own story.

Mmmm no I thought elsa was going to talk to him but it a good story