Reviews for Becoming More
Kyuubinokitsune1995 chapter 10 . 6/17/2019
That was a bit much for me the mother and child was a bit too dark but I like your writing style. I hope you update soon! Trying to update all your Naruto stories I’ve read them all!
Dragon0905 chapter 11 . 7/27/2018
Well, you obviously wanted a story portraying gay couples and showing that it's okay to be so. Now unless I miss my guess, you are a gay female as well. Are probably hiding it from the majority of the world or recently came out about it. Also you are still confused in some areas.
Story wise, this is honestly, better than I originally thought it might be. Other than some fairly minor grammar issues I only have one major issue.
You made naruto, a boy with many mental issues about himself and others, into a girl. Who the same day, even though he was supposedly in love with Sakura and had abso-fucking-lutly no idea how to talk to girls or understand even the basics of communication, had not just one but two girls jumping at her. They were so suddenly in love with her, she might as well be using a jutsu. And within a few days had already basically started relationships with both.
Now since for the most part your trying to make this believable, unless your telling me this is in fact how people you know act, I find this particular detail flawed.
And as for the rest of the story, we'll good job so far.
elliehandesu chapter 11 . 7/14/2018
Nice... one of the best naruto fanfiction especially the susprised pairing here. All the details of each chapter for me is a brilliant. I'll be patience enough for the next chapter then.
BlazeStryker chapter 2 . 7/13/2018
I wonder how Kyuubi's gonna take it when she realizes she killed her youngest brother without even knowing he was in there?
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 7/11/2018
Another good chapter. Looks like Kamiko will have both Jiraiya AND Yugao as her senseis! Cool. I hope Kamiko and Ino will make up later on though. Poor girls.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 7/11/2018
Good chapter! Ooh boy! Looks like Kamiko will have some...girl issues down the line! Lol.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 7/11/2018
Interesting start. Although Akane saying “Ya Know” too much might get annoying for readers down the line. Might wanna keep it to a minimum.

Nonetheless, very good start.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/8/2018
absolutely fucking retarted
777torn777 chapter 11 . 7/8/2018
Solid chapter.
Ravagerblade chapter 2 . 7/7/2018
Would it be to hard to actually put in Fem Kyubi, Kurama... would help people decide to read it or not.
DschingisKhan chapter 10 . 6/16/2018
I'm always down to at least give lesbian Naruto a chance. Though with the character tags you've got here, I'm probably most interested in how you plan to build the relationship between Ino and Temari, which is something I've never even considered.
Yurihentai641 chapter 10 . 6/15/2018
Poor Ino is confused and Temari feels betrayed. Aw. So question would you say that Katsumi is like a double Jinchuriki now? Also are fox and wolf going to become friends? lovers? is Miyako an actual wolf demon now or is that just the form of her chakra?
Guest chapter 10 . 6/4/2018
Excited to see a new update! I look forward to more in the future, thank you!
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 10 . 6/3/2018
Love that you are writing again and can’t wait to read more
Balrog1788 chapter 10 . 5/19/2018
Your alive... Yes! it's great to see an update to this beautiful story.
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