This is awful in the very best way. Your writing is brilliant, and you capture the characters wonderfully. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

Powerful last line! Loved it! :-)

No. NO.

MORE. NEED MORE.

Like, Thorin reconciling with his beloved sister-sons before they charge out to fight in the battle of the five armies.

I know this is a one shot but a what happens next would be really good. the tension in this scene is brilliant. Just and idea. :)

This is so hard, I hate it when Thorin succumbs to the gold sickness, and this is worse than anything that I thought could have happened. :( Good story though. You really have a gift. :)

Wow! That was so powerful...

O.o Will be there sequel?

Great fic

I really like this. I loved the Thorin/gold lust part in the book and so far that's basically the only part I'm liking in the movie... Very well written and in-character.
"This was never on the contract." great line.

Angsty and painful, I love it!

Complete? What do you mean this is complete?! I need more dang it! I need to see what happens! Does he snap out of it? How do Fili and Kili fare? Please give us more!
This was...wow. Just wow. We already kinda see what happens when the Arkenstone is withheld from Thorin and I'm really hoping he doesn't go quite this far out of the deep end.
Please don't let this be a one shot without a sequel chapter/story!

Keep it up!
Arlothia

This gave me chills - great job :)

Okay... Should've read the genre before I assumed that this was a fluffy family story. This was disturbing... and good.

Love the darkness. Really well written, can't wait to read more by you!

Holy smokes, this was a heart wrencher. Nicely written!