Your story is magnificent! You have such a talent because I totally believed and was invested in their relationship. Also thank you you for completing it as I know endings are hard.

Just finished binge reading this and i'm glad I did. I'll also throw my two cents in and say this could go in many directions now that this 'arc' is over and I hope to see more in the future.

Awesome fic!

Im dead 3 and sad its over, this was really good :)

Soooo, she's either a Phoenix or dragon _ Right?

I dont know if she's a dragon or not. She apparently isnt impressed by the gold and wealth. Maybe only boy dragons hoard gold? Lol. Maybe she's not a dragon and Ive got it all wrong. Ill keep reading.

I would like to make a prediction! I predict that she is actually of dragon descent but had a spell cast on her as a baby to be in the shape of a human. Which is why she doesnt age, has a strange face, and is immune to fire! I hope Im right! _

Okay. I adore this story. But I do have one thing to say, the hymen isn't something one needs to burst though. I really don't know why people think this, where would the period blood come from if there was something blocking the pathway?
Great story either way, but boy did I need to point that out.

I loved this so much. I hope u write a million novels u definitely have a talent for writing

Love it! thank you for writing and publishing!

amazing I read this all in one go and boy oh noy I cannot tell you how much i loved this. Holy bejeezuz the writing style was perfect for this and man did this story send tingles of anticipation through me. I hope with all my heart you continue writing this, but if you ever just. don't want to anymore. I understand you dont need to explain. Although I really hope you dont but if you do, could you just update it saying "discontinued" Dont wanna get my hopes up eheheh. Thank you for sharing and taking the time to write this.

Im loving the story and even though I have many chapters to read, I am restless for them too see eachother again. She - him in human form and he - her in Phoenix form. And Thandruil (spell check that) that ass. And hm...will she find her escape with Bilbo and the rest or before that? Will she talk them from trying to kill her Smaug? Will Smaug change himself for her? So many questions.

That was beautiful. Absolutely loved it

I can get everything else, but somehow hate this. This time, Smaug's gone far over the top. Too far.
I don't get why Lily didn't try sooner. Harder. She's not only a phoenix but the voice of reason - or at least, as the only other creature Smaug listens to except for himself, she ought to gave acted the part.
I don't get why people are acting so terribly gleeful of the moment; I just don't.
It sucks that a good, interesting story has put me off from reading the rest with just a few words, but it's true. Your main characters who find their chance, are just as cruel as the pricks from fairy tales told to children, the ones everyone sees as good guys.
At least, I can see Smaug in his true colours now. I'm not blinded by the visions of dragons. And I hope I never will be...

Thanks !

***Pyrane***