I'm sorry but everything Yasuo has said up to this point in the chapter sounds lame. He's a badass, not the overshadowed would-be hero.

I love your character development, feels a bit rushed though, it's also kinda weird how Yasuo just manages to meet all of these champions.

Good story!

NOOOOOO! I CAN'T BE OVER!

I'm sad now :(

... and now I got over it.

What a great few chapters- excellent way to end it, despite that character dying (RIP :'( ).

Both of you guys are excellent authors, and should never, EVER, in a million YEARS should give up writing. You both have such a great passion for this, and if you two stop writing, a great loss will happen to the FF community as a whole.

Thanks so much for the writing you guys did, 10/10 would read again. Can't wait for Legacy of Shadow to take off :)

-Carbon839

How do you applaud in text? probably something like *clapclap* or s, right? well then:
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that aside: awesome. the one word i could really use to describe this, because, i just enjoyed reading this so much, with the funny sidecomments sliping in here and there, and then the important and intense moment, the lighthearted scences (a scattered few, but they were there and good) all in all, it was a great read, one you couldn't even have better in a published book
Ryder

Senpai mentioned me!

Awesome! So, maybe thresh will come next chapter am I right? ;)

CLIFFHANGERRSSSSSS

The end is so close, but I don't want it to happen! Yes I do! No I don't!

I DON'T KNOW! I just know it will be good! Can't wait for next chapter!

Seriously? Draven? What ever, it's your fanfic
ANYWAY, it's getting interesting and can't waited for the next chapter. Hope Yasuo won't kill her(Riven).

I'm enjoying it way too much. Awesome. Please, keep going or I'll probably die of intense. Though I'm not from english-speaking country, understand almost all, what you're saying. Amazing work!

OH MAN, LOST SOULS HYPE! I know that chapter will be great!

Oh, by the way, don't feel so pressured to post. Vacation is used to take a break, and you're in Italy! Explore a little and have fun!

okay, thanks for answering,
that also clarifies why noone knows who yorick, a league champion is. And might i mention i hate it that you give us that hint to other chapters that are to come is mean :( but hey, thats how you get viewers/readers, whatever you call them
more criticism (i hate pointing things like this out, by the way) if Yasous pulls out people's souls, why do they continue to act normal? he took draven's soul, you doesn't seem all to chamged, and he took yone's sould, who didn't really chang either.
but, like the last time, great work, keep it up. still love reading this :)

cheers
Ryder

Draaaaaaven, not draven.

Damn dood! All those champs (or theoretically they're not champs), coming together to help out Yasuo. I feel bad for the man, though. Having to kill his own brother is no easy task.

Can't wait to see how Jax joins the fray. Maybe he is already in the Shadow Isles? :P

Thanks for so much! Can't wait for the next chapter! Looks like it's going to be a great one.