Aww, so close! Again! Parents and their over-protectiveness. Though I wonder what will happen next when Sora teaches Kairi more about the human world. It was a close call their. Hey, is their anyway Kairi will be able to go to school with Sora? I was wondering what might happen if she ran in with Seifer and his gang and Sora tries to protect her.
Aside from that suggestion, I thought tour chapter was very well written and enjoyable. Fantastic work.

Thank god you didn't forget about this story! This chapter was a fun read, especially when Sora was teaching Kairi how to swim. God, that scene was just so cute!

Please hurry up

I wasn't expecting one update, never mind three. Thanks for surprising me! I think you've definitely improved your writing skills since the third chapter

I really love how you did this chapter, but you need to add apostrophes to some of your words still. I'm thinking that Kairi will be joining Sora on going to school tomorrow. I'm just throwing out an idea here, and you can use it if you want or not, but I was thinking both might meet Riku and then meet Seifer who tries to take Kairi from Sora and then Sora finally gets mad at him and fights back and saves her. Just an idea, to use it or not is up to you.

Sweet job on the chapter, it was sweet and touching. It makes me want to see Sora's and Kairi' relationship go further, maybe even with a *cough cough* kiss *cough*. Good luck on your writing.

I really love this chapter! I just found Sora teaching Kairi how to walk super cute!
I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love the story so far. keep up the good work. I wonder how kairi is gonna fit in into the human world. hopefully she'll learn how to walk soon. Wait a minute, doesn't sora need to show her how to dress in the human world too? *blushes*

UPDATE THIS NOW HOW DARE U DO A CLIFF HANGE PLEASE THIS IS A GOOD STORY

Yay, my theory was right! Minus a few typo errors in the story, such as missing apostrophes and misspelled words ( Like 'you give me no choose' instead of "you give me no choice."), this chapter was awesome! I'm worried for Kairi. If anything, when she wakes up I imagine she would be very scared and frightened to find she has legs and is at Sora's house and when Sora comes to comfort her she starts crying. Also, I think she might have some trouble standing up straight and walking, especially since she's never done it before and she doesn't have enough muscle built in her legs yet. Am I right?

As for Kairi's father, yeah he's a bunch of words that I'm not allowed to use. I think maybe the reason hr's so mean is because of his wife. Like the Little Mermaid 3, his wife is dead by humans and he's cruel and over-protective of his girls with humans. Am I right? I look forward on how this turns out. Good luck on your writings.

Wow, this was a fast update.
So Sora finally got to meet Kairi's dad, which I find good. And now I want the next chapter just because of that ending

Wow! Didn't see that one coming and Pecery Jackson books are so much better than the movies by far. Great chapter though. Update soon.

I'm glad Kairi is safe, or is she? I'm worried about her family, sisters, and father will be angry at her and do something bad to her and then she escapes and goes to Sora for help. I am kinda hoping that happens and she meets Sora at the island and there's crying and he comforts her and stuff. Great chapter by the way. Happy writings.

That last sentence. Just, woah.
I thought you forgot about this story! I'm glad to see that you didn't!

Please write more

Awww sweet. Awesome chapter. I only have one question: When Sora was healed by Kairi twice, did he also gain some mermaid traits/swimming abilities from her healing magic? If so, that's really cool. Oh and Seifer is a (bleep). Anyway, I love this chapter! Please update soon.