This chapter was phenomenal. The action and suspense was wonderful. I loved the plan James had made, was definitely better than what Lily had planned. AND LILY! That speech she gave Snape was an absolute read. I greatly enjoyed the venom and spite in her voice. Snivelly, James dear, heart or fingers, like he took mine! That was absolutely fantastic, I had to read it over so many times. And of course Snape got away, the slimy git, he can wriggle out of anything. And don't get me started on Sirius' speech to McGonagall, brill-i-ant! And wow is Remus angry, well they all are, so much anger. It just makes sense that when James and Lily stop fighting everyone else becomes angry (Remus). I totally understand the whole college thing too, so until next time, I'll be waiting ;-)

I haven't reviewed in forever (sorry). BUT. OH. MY. GOSH! This chapter was A-MAY-ZING! I loved the interactions between the characters James/Lily and Sirius/Cara. Your characterization is as always on point. I was so excited to read this story after "Moira Toomey" I was so excited to see how this played out. The ending though, was by far the BEST part. So much tension of fear of what would happen. And personally like Remus' friends I never likes the Toomey girl, but her bravery is astounding. AND SNAPE! Of all the people the guy that has seriously injured the most students has to be here!? I'm so excited to read on.

OHMYGOD PLEASE UPDATE IM DYING HERE. thanks

OMG PLEASE DONT LEAVE IT HERE. UGHHHHH

CARA AND SIRIUS LOOOOOOOOOOVEEEE YUS YUS YUSS THANK YOU THANK YOU. ommmmmg is it christmas early?! or did you actually let them be together ! i love you i love you i love you YUSSSS :D bahahhaa so so stoked for the next chappie ! and especially with a friggen cliff hanger like that one ! sweet baby jesus I'm excited. excellent work mate ! mine is slowly coming along, school is eating my soul, you know the usualllll. hopefully i have a moment to breathe from this school work to finish my fucking chapter lmao excellent work ! cant wait for the next oneee 3

LOVED IT :D Im actually starting to like Moria.. which probably means you're going to kill her off soon lmao. but she's finally growing some lady balls. FINALLY. loved the cute Jily banter.. oh how i live for Jily banterrrr AGHHH so intense, I'm really interested in how this plans go. AND THANK MERLIN FOR DORCAS... Marlene has to get her perky little ass outta that bed and go on to fuck shit up with her missing fingers shah fuck i love your dorcas ahaha :D anyways, onto the next one ! :) loved it !miss you

I feel so bad for waiting so long to review, college has been hectic. Thanks so much for the shout out it means a lot to me. I'm so glad you're getting more reviews, this story is definitely special. Now on to the review!
Poor Marlene! That's such a terrible thing. That's something I admire about your story, it's not an 'everything will be perfect' story. It has substance and bad things can happen. And it's not too much either, like it's only bad things. I felt so bad for Marlene, I couldn't imagine what she feels.
Of course, low and behold Remus just haaaaad to find Emmeline's bed. And of course they just haaaaaad to start fighting. Seriously, it seems these two fight more than Snape and James. I loved her sassy sarcasm and his anger and protectiveness. I hope that they start getting along better, because this is the time where they all need each other the most.
I love the JamesxLily parts you put in this story and how neither of them can talk to the other... ever. You can hardly believe they end up happily married. But Lily's fury was a nice side to see. I guess Snape realized there really was no chance of him consoling with Lily so might as well jump in the deep end. I mean first they were best friends, now she is not only angry at him but wants to kill him. I think he made the most damage in that duel.
Moira Toomey! I guessed it before they said it! It's a wonderful idea but I'm not sure Remus will like it. James is just a guy who cares far too much and Lily is just a downer.
This story is still fantastic and I feel you about the whole computer thing, we're in the same boat. So don't worry about the timing.
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AGHHHH MERLIN LILY, GET IT TOGETHER! I THOUGHT SHE WOULD FINALLY REALIZE THAT NOBODY IS SAFE, EVEN IF YOU'RE AT HOGWARTS! AGHHH BUT JILY THOUGH 3 I LOVE ME SOME JILY. Cannot wait of the next chapter! ALSO HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY 3 I hope you're adjusting to your res alright ! and thanks so much for the mention in your authors note ! :) love ya girl

AGHHHH! its getting so intense, I don't know if my heart can handle it! loved the chapter so so much, poor Lily 3 THAT WAS SO UNFAIR, WTF MINNIE, GET IT TOGETHER. alssssso... I'm imagining cute cuddling jily scene.. ima cross my fingers for some jily ;D hahahah love your story, on to the next one

IMA KEEP THIS SHORT BC I WANNA READ THE NEXT CHAPTER BUT DAAAAAAMN I LVOED THIS CHAPTER, BY FAR ONE OF MY FAV IN THIS FIC ! AGHHHHH THE SUSPENSE, ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER 3

such a good chapter ! I love the scenes with Em, I cannot wait for her to get her memory back! hopefully in time to save Lily ! :D amazing. Annnd somehow you got me sort of liking moira and rem together.. even though I'm shipping em and rem harrrrd. she didn't seem like such a lunatic this chapter shah i suppose she grew on me a bit. AND THANK YOU FUCKING MARLENE, I'VE BEEN THINKING THE SAME THING. THERE IS NOTHING A QUICK SHAG CANT FIX, AND CARA AND SIRIUS ARE IN NEED OF ONE! jesus this sexual tension is INSANE. ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER 3 ps. miss you, msg me on tumblr?

WHAT A CHAPTER ! OHHH MY GODD REMUS JOHN LUPIN YOU SIT DOWN! DON'T TALK TO YOUR FRIENDS LIKE THAT. PIPE THE FUCK DOWN. amazing chapter, i really really love where this story is going :) ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER :D

first up : MOONSICKLE? MOONSICKLE? BAHAHAHAHAHA I CHOKED A BIT AT THAT. I love when you write the boys, makes me so so happy. REMUS GOD DAMMIT GET IT TOGETHER! (but don't stop writing him so accurately haha) loved this chapter. I love that you write Remus with some negativity and self loathing, after all thats what he is good at.
second: THE CLIFFE HANGER THOUGH! OH MAAN THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC, CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. :)

AGGHHHH okay first, i MISSS YOU 3 we need to catch up. ANNND second another wonderful chapter my friend! I loved the dorcas and cara scene hahah i loved the line "he does know that you two share a common room right?" BAH. i love how you write dorcas, its very similar to how i do. full of sass! haha i hate when people make her so lame, so thank you for thinking she is a sass master like i do hahahaha ALSO EMOTIONAL SIRIUS/CARA SCENE HOLY CRAP IT WAS PERFECT. I loved that cara called sirius out on his shit, like coming to make things worse than actually fix things! finally they're moving in some sort of direction, no more of this ignoring each other bs! well, ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'm going to be working on my story tonight, so expect a update (or two muahaha) in the next couple days!

YES FINALLY! The truth is finally revealed! That fight scene was great. But I still feel bad for Emmeline, she still can't catch a break. And Narcissa is so snippy, making fun of Cara. And I loved the way you portrayed Snape and Lucius. And that fight was so awesome. I was at the edge of my (figurative) seat. And Snape using that curse on Emmeline, so they couldn't heal her. And then the whole Snivellus vs. Potter moment, pure art. It was so great and then Snape burned him, beautiful. Poor Lily, I could just imagine the pain, but just reading it was painful. I hope things start to look up, now that the hurricane of a storm has passed I hope our heroes and heroines get better.
And don't feel bad about not updating, I totally get it. Take care of you and yours and we can wait. Till next time...
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