Hey, I know you will probably not see this, but I wish you did not stop writing. I love so many of your stories, and I wish I could see them completed. I know your doing your whole book thing, I just wish you didn't quit writing these.

Schiffer is a mispelling that occurred based on the pronunciation of Ulquiorra's last name. Cifer is the proper spelling as it is supposed to be a play on words so to speak of Lucifer, hence the devil like appearance in his Second Release and the fact that his habit of stabbing people in the chest is supposed to be representative of the satanic ritual for pulling out someone's heart.

If you're interested in anymore fun facts, there's a common misconception that Ulquiorra's representation of death is despair. That is ACTUALLY Nnoitra's representation. Ulquiorra's is Nothingness. Aside from that, Ulquiorra's name is also a play on words for "El que llora" which means "He who cries." (2 L's make a "y" sound in Spanish if you weren't aware :P)

You clever dog.

Ulquiorra being Naruto is a twist that I thought wouldn't work, considering how opposite they are, but you're actually pulling it off very well. I like the parallels between Hinata and Orihime, although I agree that Hinata is 'better', so to speak (I also hate UlquiHime with a passion). Harribel being Hinata does make sense, and I'm interested to see how they finally work out they're looking for each other.

Tsari

"If I remember correctly, her name was Hi-"

Knock! Knock!

ARGH! WHY JUST WHY, OH MAH GOSH! And yeah, it happened twice I bet there wouldn't be anymore wrong timings huh? Because... I. Wel. Keel. Ya.

Oh wait, after Aizen requested for Ulquiorra to bring, or rather, kidnapped Orihime I was like... 'In the episode where Ulquiorra died, he did managed to find an emotion right?'

And now I'm like... 'Orihime and Hinata somewhat share some attitude and personality.'

...

Okay plot twist. LOOOL! Hahaha! Ulquiorra thinks that Hinata is somewhat Orihime!

*dead*

*slams head into the cratered wall* STOP TORTURING US WITH THOSE LITTLE TEASES! MY WALL CAN'T TAKE ANYMORE! TT-TT

I have a question. Where's Kyuubi? Is he totally gone now that Naruto is an arrancar?

GAH! *Slams head into wall* SO close! If Harribel had just been able to find out about Ulquiorra's past, she'd realize he was Naruto, and she could tell him she was Hinata! And then they could be together, or at least try!

*keeps slamming head into wall* Why you torture us? WHY?! TT-TT

This is gonna take a while isn't it? Hope you update soon.

Um... Isn't Ulquiorra's aspect of death emptiness? Er but the way you write his character seems a bit off. I dunno but I think Ulquiorra should have more emptiness inside him, like he's that hard to show any slight emotion or something like that. Uhh... I can't say anymore, you probably won't understand my english then. But, its a nice story and oh I just noticed that you kept on asking reader if you should put your story in the crossover archive but um in my opinion, you should do things as you wish:) It's fine just the way it is.

Gah! They both need to hurry and find out the truth about the other! TT-TT

Still, nice chapter. Keep it up!

Epic work. *nods* very nicely done so far.

Well if these are Naruto's and Hinata's reincarnations than the manga should go differently since they have their past lives memories, than again Naruto seems to barely remember his and Hinata might not do anything differently than what happens in canon since iirc Harribel wasn't evil or anything.

Well I honestly have never relaly read or watched the manga/anime, so as long as Ulquiorra and Harribel don't die (or if they do die, are brought back to life with their full memories), I don't honestly care.

Nice work so far. very nice indeed. Keep it up!

This is should be in the Crossover section. But other than that this is a good beginning.