IT'S BEEN OVER 3 YEARS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED! HOW CAN WE ENJOY IT WHEN IT'S NEVER FINISHED!

Huhhh..how come they dont recognize Hiccup?

So they didn't know it was Hiccup? And so they just left him? Why didn't he reveal himself? Please hurry up and update, you can't just leave us like this! Amazing, please hurry with the next chapter!

Is this a yaoi? Because I really REALLY hope it turns into a yaoi.

what exactly happened with Hiccup, Stoick and Astrid? Did they really just leave him there? It sounded like Stoick didn't even recognize him or something...

his deal sort of worked but Alvin was a few days early and he did release his dragons anyway. poor Stoick...

you got Hiccup perfectly! nice so far

You really managed to confuse me with this chapter-How did Stoick and Astrid not recognize Hiccup (his voice, if not the sight of him, should've been dead give aways-without even bringing up his mention of Toothless by name) ? Because they never would have left him there if they had...mark or no mark (especially since Alvin informed Hiccup that the mark would fade). So-yeah, really very confused right now.

Oooohhh. So glad about the update :D Can't wait 4 more :D

I love it. Will Hiccup's mother make an appearance with Cloudjumper there?

Okay, I've been reading this for a little and I decided to do my thoughts on these chapters then the next few and so on.

My first point falls in the first chapter with his leg shattering in two and him thinking about what they expected him to do when after that you did the same thing in the second chapter with Hiccup's nightmare. He wriggled out of their hands and made it to his father.

Second point falls in the third chapter when Stoick refers to Hiccup's emerald green eyes. You aren't the only one that is at fault here but no one seems to remember that Stoick also has green eyes. They are nearly identical. So either way Hiccup would have ended up with green eyes. Just because his mother isn't in the story people forget about the characters in the story already.

Third point is when you start talking about Hiccup talking about his mother. If he was an infant when his mother was taken, he wouldn't remember anything. I don't remember anything from when I was a baby or toddler.

Remember this is just constructive criticism and I can't wait to continue reading.

OMG! Plzzzzzz update as soon as u can :D

OH MY GOSH! WHY DO U HAVE TO TORTURE ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS! I LOVE THIS, EVEN OF OT ONLY IS 300 WORDS ITS SL BEAUTIOUS! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!

Hurry! The suspension is killing me! D:

Plzzzz get the nxt chapter up :) oh. If u do a deathfic then cool. But otherwise dnt have Hiccup rescued straight away plz. Some more hiccup torture :D :P