My brother likes this

Very nice start to the story. It sets a mood and a goal for Yasou. And hot damn! Almost 300k words! This ought to keep me occupied for some hours, I'm looking forward to it! :D
(Btw, Yone actually has 2 swords, but I don't think there was a way to know that at the time, not that it'd be important)

jesus fucking christ i was led to believe this was a story about yasuo from the description... seems the author is a filthy liar

for fucks sake stop writing about riven

fuck off riven nobody cares about riven

Bruh I just lost a game. So I read this instead. Feelsbadman- Erick

Loved it!

Okay, you probably did want the story to not be to dark but still, she got of to easy. And once agai. the yasuo thing, he didn't murder a single one of them, he was forced to kill them all in self defence, it's a very huge difference and also makes him completely sinnles in that matter. Sure it makes sense he thinks so himself, it doesn't change however that he commited no sin.

Look, I do not want to insult you, you obviously put a lot of effort into this story but I am afraid that after arriving at the institue you started handling the whole subject of redemption pretty damn badly. Especially everything invloving Ahri, the idea that you should't face consequences for your actions and that you made Yasuo seem way more guilty of stuff then he is.

Is Ahri supposes to come over as a total self righteous bitch that talks about things she has absolutely no right to talk about?

6/10 no sex between riven and yasuo

Aghh these fics again, I swear the drama is so cliché I can basically summarise the whole story from this random chapter that I skipped to. Boy meets girl, falls in love, past catches up to them, breaks them up, boy chases after girl again, they have their sweet reunion, and depending on how the author wants to play it, some more drama before the climax. Honestly this is more character exploration than story. A story of 2 people with serious regrets getting together is amongst one of the most painful and disturbing stories to read. Sure it may be written well, but fuck if there aren't better things to do than plow through angsty shit and overcomplicated self inflicted conflicts. Surely people would rather read a dark yet realistic story like GOTT or a light hearted sweet romance rather than the back and forth about some tragic relationship between 2 equally twisted characters determined to prove whose the bigger masochist, when they could've easily achieved their life goals without half the aforementioned cancerous life obstacles. Seriously are people such masochists these days that they'd read about such a relationship not even intrinsically related to our own, utilizing far fetched concepts of angst. This ain't a tragedy, it utilized the backstory of one but would be more accurately labelled as Masochistic angst. The author just gets to a point where he pushes situations together to give off the feel of deeper character growth when it could be simply forgiven or never even occur.

best champ ever made! (so far)

no this the worst

worst chap so far